Bee-Leaf

golden bee humming
lost in foliage jade green
where are the flowers

have you flown too far
long miles from the honeycomb
wherefore did you roam

you will find your way
back to the fields of colors
beyond deep green woods

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Gershon Wolf

July 22, 2021 at 5:25 PM

'Flown to far,' Should have driven a car... Enjoyed the adventures of this bee, Evelyn. ~ Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 22, 2021 at 8:14 PM

He was out of gas. :0 Thank you very much. Evelyn

Rama Balasubramanian

July 20, 2021 at 11:25 AM

Beautiful! Loved the words fields of colour.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 20, 2021 at 11:37 AM

Thank you for your appreciation. :D

Sotto Poet

July 20, 2021 at 9:55 AM

Beautiful, Nothing is better than appreciating nature in its purest form, especially those humming bees. My grandson is only a year old, and the only word he can correctly spell is bees... bees, relating to the bee movie that he loves to watch. Kindest regards, my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 20, 2021 at 11:45 AM

Thank you very much for your words of support. Your grandson is quite young for spelling. Maybe he'll be a writer, too. Television can be a great learning aid. Have an enjoyable day, Evelyn :)