Bee Line

I spied them up ahead
So I made a bee line
Along with the other bees
My heartbeat
Repeating:
“Lilacs! Lilacs! Lilacs!"



Second in a series written 4/25/09 in the Brooklyn Botanic Garden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 7, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Corinne, what fun! I love bees. Nice poem. I think I'd like to fly off with them to those beautiful Lilacs, too. Once or twice smiling Love, Dane
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April 28, 2009 at 2:58 PM
*****^^^^^Corinne, lovely and nicely penned.^^^^^*****Ernilando
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April 27, 2009 at 5:34 PM
Hi Corrine. I haven't seen the Flying Dutchman movie with James Mason. Do you know when it came out? I'd like to watch it. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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April 27, 2009 at 2:33 PM
Ah, the allure of lilacs for hungry bees! How creative your "Bee Line" is, Corinne!
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