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Bee Line

I spied them up ahead So I made a bee line Along with the other bees My heartbeat Repeating: “Lilacs! Lilacs! Lilacs!" Second in a series written 4/25/09 in the Brooklyn Botanic Garden

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/7/2009 12:47:00 PM

Corinne, what fun! I love bees. Nice poem. I think I'd like to fly off with them to those beautiful Lilacs, too. Once or twice smiling Love, Dane

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/28/2009 2:58:00 PM

*****^^^^^Corinne, lovely and nicely penned.^^^^^*****Ernilando

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2009 5:34:00 PM

Hi Corrine. I haven't seen the Flying Dutchman movie with James Mason. Do you know when it came out? I'd like to watch it. Best Wishes, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/27/2009 2:33:00 PM

Ah, the allure of lilacs for hungry bees! How creative your "Bee Line" is, Corinne!