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Bedtime Ku

harley beside me sound of sleep cranky passenger MagiCicada13 *Harley Davidson Motorcycle

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/17/2020 10:06:00 PM

Thanks for reading so many of my poems, by the way ... you remind me of the things I nearly forgot about!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/18/2020 2:36:00 PM

Ditto! The pleasure is mine. xomo

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/17/2020 10:05:00 PM

My first thought was a dog actually (course my brother used to have a pooch named Harley... lol). I like how that last line could be taken a couple different ways - either you or the bike.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/18/2020 2:35:00 PM

The moment I posted this his snoring tapered off to acceptable decibels, like he knew or something. I wanted to fit in riding b*tch" but that's a taboo word around here, much to my chagrin. It has been endeared to me, my first dog most magnificent. ;),

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2020 7:02:00 PM

Get your Harley a new muffler! lol. Cheers, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/18/2020 2:28:00 PM

I'm working on it! He's stopped drinking beer which has really helped. Hugs you, xomo!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/17/2020 1:53:00 PM

Haha, that's a great one! A good laugh.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/17/2020 2:41:00 PM

I recorded him snoring once, with my doves answering him ;), Cheers! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2020 9:02:00 PM

My husband had one of those once. But we hardly used it when 2008 came along and wiped us out. So we sold it half of what we paid for it! In older days, Joe took me around on other motorcycles to those big events they hold for enthusiasts. We had some fun days!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/17/2020 8:33:00 AM

I've been to North American & Worlds Bike Courier race events, I imagine the feeling being much the same, just a lot less noisy and a lot more drinking and riding ;), xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/16/2020 7:31:00 PM

I loved the purr of my BMW 600; Harleys always sounded like a crippled duck to me, so let love Triumph! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/17/2020 8:29:00 AM

BMW's & Triumphs are sexy bikes. Love the "crippled duck"! My hubby's buddy's got a yellow one- me laugh so hard ;D, xomo!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/16/2020 8:58:00 AM

So cleverly expressed. I had a dog once who snored, I should have named him Harley.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 9:03:00 AM

Harley's a great name for a dog! Thank you Rick, hugs! xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/16/2020 6:56:00 AM

This is amazing poetry my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 9:02:00 AM

Wow and thank you! Hugs ~ xomo!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2020 2:55:00 AM

sharp ink Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/16/2020 4:48:00 AM

And wouldn't you know it, the moment I posted this he turned over like a Triumph. Funny you mention the beer, he hasn't snored like that since giving up the BSA (Brad Snores Ale) ;), xomo!

David Mohn

Date: 5/15/2020 10:01:00 PM

I've heard Harley is making a CPAP model...this is clever :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2020 2:57:00 AM

The tt practices were due to start at the end of May Mo you can't begin to imagine how quiet it will be and what a massive blow it is to the tourism of the Island, so many businesses will struggle especially hotels. On a good side the brewery is selling off its beer cheap to get rid of stocks

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/15/2020 10:04:00 PM

Lol! The Biker's Church is just around the corner from me, if this social distancing keeps up it will be an unprecedented quiet summer here. Thank you David! ~ mo ;),