Rosie Hill Poet Free verse

Bedroom Thrills

He saw me,  it was ‘love’ at first sight
sadly for him it was just love for the night
I’m flattered by your strategic skills
but after the bedroom thrills 
I’m gone out of sight 
You thought You had me
but i went and changed my mind 
Your left without me
you didn’t even put up a fight
I hardly care, Im left here still
after the bedroom thrills
I ran out of your life

By Rosie Hill

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John Castellenas March 13, 2019 at 7:54 AM More pretenders than people, who will stay. I understand the words written. Rosie Hill March 13, 2019 at 11:53 AM I’m glad my poem inspired you to comment, hope to hear from you again. Rosie

Darlene De Beaulieu March 9, 2019 at 8:04 PM Hello Rosie, that was a horrible thing to happen to this person. That person will find it hard to trust. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu March 12, 2019 at 5:38 PM Hello Rosie Hill, I agree if the person give the impression that the person is just for sex,it is wrong.Yes it does happen all too much. Have a nice evening my friend. x Rosie Hill March 10, 2019 at 6:05 AM I feel that one night stands are common, I don’t disagree with the concept. However if one gives you the idea that your more then just sex to them and leave, that’s where I feel the wrong doing is done here. It happens all to much x

DM Babbit February 25, 2019 at 10:02 AM Nicely done Rosie. Welcome. Rosie Hill February 26, 2019 at 3:54 AM Thankyou so much, very happy that you enjoyed it and commented.

Gershon Wolf February 23, 2019 at 10:46 PM I guess he was a one-night stand man. (They're a dime a dozen at the man-stand, I hear...). ~ Gershon Rosie Hill February 26, 2019 at 3:53 AM One night stands are all too common now, I don’t disagree with them, just when you are lead that he likes you back, you don’t think that it would be just a one night thing. Hope you enjoyed the read.

James Edward Lee Sr. February 21, 2019 at 12:42 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup! Rosie.. A sincere learning verse for man or woman kind...brilliant write a FAV for me. Write On James Rosie Hill February 26, 2019 at 3:50 AM I’m so glad you like it! One of your favourites?! I’m flattered. I shall keep writing and hope you enjoy them, would love to publish my own poetry book one day butndont know where to start!

Curtis Moorman February 21, 2019 at 11:07 AM Rosie, welcome to Soup! I like the poem but I detest the man who caused you to write it. Anyone who would treat a woman in this manner is cruel, uncaring, egotistical, a coward, and not really a man at all. Hold your head high, girl. It was not your fault at all. Rosie Hill February 26, 2019 at 3:49 AM I feel like every person can relate to a one night stand, or the confusion of being mislead by the person you are interested in whether they want more or not. Thank you for your words and thoughts, I’m truly okay, he is the one who is missing out.

Panagiota Romios February 15, 2019 at 5:02 AM Rosie~ one Nighters are not unusual as you know.Perhaps I am wrong, I really don't know. Some make us bitter, some make us glow. I appreciate your honesty so much. Panagiota Rosie Hill February 15, 2019 at 6:23 AM This poem is based on when I was seeing someone, where it was supposed to be more then a one night stand but once I slept with him, he left. He only wanted that one night, yet lead on he wanted more

Caren Krutsinger February 9, 2019 at 1:14 AM You have written a heartfelt honest poem, in such a spectacularly matter-of-fact way, but the reader can glean the hurt between the lines, Rosie. Well done! Rosie Hill February 9, 2019 at 3:52 AM Thankyou so much, I feel every person can relate to the confusion of a one night stand x

Kim Rodrigues February 8, 2019 at 7:04 PM Rosie, a sad one - well written! Rosie Hill February 9, 2019 at 3:52 AM Thankyou very much! Xx