Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Bed of Petals

There it lay unseen by man
On a bed  of rose petals
Perfume wafting as on a fan
Dew shimmers as it settles.

Who or what, lies within
What secret does the petals  hide
Whats snuggled down in sleep
Its a leveret we will name "Abide"

Your mam was killed your all alone
Could see you were distressed
Knew you would be safe with me
Close to my petals pressed
 
Come little man no one to hurt you
Hidden  amongst the petals soft
"Abide" with me your safe from danger
Until your strength for life is crossed

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Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2013 at 2:49 PM Yes, it does have a hint of mystery, as caleb states! NIcely done for the contest, Seren. Isn't that a beautiful topic she gave us? Seren Roberts April 4, 2013 at 3:51 PM Thanks Andrea , its funny how different people see things in a write....Seren

Painted Hunter April 3, 2013 at 10:43 AM very interesting...a little mysterious too...I LIKE it! Seren Roberts April 3, 2013 at 10:47 AM Glad you likr it Caleb....Seren

Wayland Bunch April 3, 2013 at 1:34 AM Very personal. I like it though. It has that challenge aspect and is well written. Nice work Seren. Seren Roberts April 4, 2013 at 3:52 PM Hello Wayland, glad you liked the read...Seren

Russell Sivey April 2, 2013 at 5:22 AM This is a brilliant write Seren, a simply brilliant write! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a special piece, quite the enlightening and romantic poem, Great Work!! Seren Roberts April 4, 2013 at 3:53 PM thanks Russell...Seren

Sukmawati Komala April 2, 2013 at 1:13 AM very nice written :) enjoyed so much thank you my dearest freind Seren for sharing :) <3 Sk Seren Roberts April 2, 2013 at 1:25 AM Thank you, for stopping by and commenting...Seren