Bed of Memories

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful win. Have A Very Blessed Merry Christmas..........

So beautiful, Ink. Prescious memories that will always hold dear in your heart. Congrats on your win in Sara's contest. Hugs Charlie

roses..Congratulations dear poet. Cheers!!!

Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I appreciate your participation. Way to go. Sara K

- Back with a congrats, Ink :) - hugs

There is almost a scent of mysticism in this enthralling poem. Memories are important. You wander in poetic emotions till the final word which is fabulous. Victor

This is soooo breathtaking, Ink. A fav because of how lovely - <3

Oh boy, the scent of your poetry reaches all the way to here, I can only imagine, thank you for this, and Merry Christmas wherever you are !

I like this picturesque vignette. The last word, mint, for some reason gave a powerful punch at the end. I question why, but it is just so appropriate.

"My son's framed heartbeat" - nice!

IE, you did capture the moment in an exquisite way! We do think about our own family often and miss them when they go out on their own or if something happens to them which we cannot control. The is a mild sadness in all of this, but we cannot escape sadness in life. It's part of all experience. Really a lovely poem. Smiles!

One word I need to describe this poem, it would be ETHEREAL! You've really mastered this grounding technique, dear ink empress, and the way you've taken my soul in your world, making me feel so many scenes, aromas and flavours whilst delving into a harmony of sounds ~ so impeccably, ahhhh, I marvel at your poetic excellence... how beautifully you've described that opening stanza with "son's framed heartbeat' gosh, that really makes me emotional and then... swaying away with memories wowww... " As wind and waves merge" Now this is what I call "music" to my ears!!! I would loveeeee to witness such a magical scene one day. And those balmy roses and wind... I'm swooning over your imagery, honestly. This is going straight into my FAVES... Keep shining and writing, sweet fairy goddess, I enjoyed reading this one so much... sending love and light to you always ~ hugsssss

Memories of our kids' babyhood and childhood are so precious, I understand it as the mother of a son. You captured such a beautiful moment so well here dear Ink. Best wishes for the contest. Hope you are doing great. Thank you for your visit to my page. Missing you and all my dear Soup friends ~ Ani

I see my son’s framed heartbeat, while the gold mirror reflects the walk-in wardrobe, oooo this a gorgeous description papiii… as nightlights kiss white sheets… ooo that one I liiiiiikes aeee .. As wind and waves merge, I hear crickets, aaah the cricket silence in a bliss at times … love those!! balmy roses mint. This piece is absolutely stunning!! Feels like um rite there with u… witnessing , hearing , feeling all these gorgeousness …

So lovely. You made this form of poetry amazingly poetic.

Those precious memories will stay with you forever IE. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

- Lovely memories...memories that we will never forget :) - Best wishes in the contest, Ink :) - hugs

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