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Bed Head

Some mornings my locks are in place
but other times tis froze
as a plane tree blooms at the base
then different days are flowers from when I rose

So splendid until I replace my shirt
I have no inkling why that would matter
it's comparable to an unironed bed skirt
not so as the mirror would shatter

I do not work anymore
and my husband is retired
in regard to my employment I walked out the door
but we're secure and inspired

I relish laying down on my couch
while he sits in his computer chair
I'm there now though not a slouch
yet tonight I don't have tousled hair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Horsman Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 10:49 PM
Just browsing through your poems. Angela, love this homely and yes inspired poetry.
Crabtree Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thank you, Harry :)
Callus Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:20 AM
As a retired person, I can relate to the lack of pressure that each morning presents me! Nevertheless, I still find myself getting up quite early, and my days are full to the brim, and probably also over brimming:) ~ Regards // paul
Crabtree Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Thank you, Paul. One day, I'll be retired :)
Ashley Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 8:20 PM
I love the spirit of this lovely poem, Angie. Your imagery of being home and embracing bed head is awesome and your last line is an amazing finish to a great piece. I can so relate! :) Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Crabtree Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, Susan :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 4:13 PM
Secure and inspired sounds wonderful. Congratulations!
Crabtree Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 4:06 PM
Thanks Caren :)
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Sounds like a relaxed environment--enjoy your retirement, Angela.
Crabtree Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 2:22 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Actually, it's my husband that's retired. I was still working and ended up walking out on my job. Some people you can work with and some you can't :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 1:45 AM
A lovely picture of domestic bliss. ~~
Crabtree Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Victor :)
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