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the wild ride, you in driver’s seat accelerating slow- ly. you’re in charge of my heartbeat - no brakes in paradise. the final momentum a feat. soul-stirring breaths, in flight, free ecstasy so sweet.
6/26/2022 Bite Size Poem no48 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 6/30/2022 2:27:00 PM
WOW, love this, can really feel the excitement in your writing, brilliant Kim x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2022 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 6/27/2022 8:22:00 AM
it thrums with excitement well written Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2022 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow!
Date: 6/27/2022 1:52:00 AM
A sweet poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2022 6:39:00 AM
Thank you ~ hugs
Date: 6/26/2022 9:42:00 PM
Wow! So much emotion conveyed in this bite-sized write, Kim. A wild journey in just six lines: A Moooooooving Experience!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2022 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!

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