Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Becoming One

the wild ride, you in driver’s seat
accelerating slow-
ly. you’re in charge of my heartbeat -
no brakes in paradise.
the final momentum a feat.
soul-stirring breaths, in flight,
free ecstasy so sweet.



6/26/2022
Bite Size Poem no48
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Jo Hayton June 30, 2022 at 2:27 PM WOW, love this, can really feel the excitement in your writing, brilliant Kim x Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2022 at 2:55 PM Thank you, Jo!

Shadow Hamilton June 27, 2022 at 8:22 AM it thrums with excitement well written Kim Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2022 at 4:19 PM Thank you, Shadow!

Victor Buhagiar June 27, 2022 at 1:52 AM A sweet poem. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2022 at 6:39 AM Thank you ~ hugs

Gershon Wolf June 26, 2022 at 9:42 PM Wow! So much emotion conveyed in this bite-sized write, Kim. A wild journey in just six lines: A Moooooooving Experience! Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2022 at 6:39 AM Thank you, my friend!