Becoming

There are days
when I don't look
for much, just an old chair
on the back porch,
a few thoughts
to pick over, perhaps
a memory to recall and,
to entertain the eye,
splotches of sunlight
to dance around 
a cup of coffee
cooling on a table.

Life distilled
to such a simple array
of mental bric-a-brac
set in a familiar scene. 
Cezanne knew it
in a bowl of fruit.
And yet how clear
the moment, how 
this bright beam
of consciousness illuminates 
a patch of existence
making it a lens
into a world trembling
on the brink of becoming.
I keep returning
for more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Scott Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 11:39 PM
What I just adore about your writing, Paul, is the deep, yet understated word. The gentle, yet homely sense of knowing the infinite. You do so much with what seems like so little. You are indeed a master craftsman; economic, precise, skillful. I can return to your poetry over and over just to marvel at the emotional nuances. What more can I say, Paul. Blessings x
Willason Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 4:01 AM
Very much humbled by your comments Sam. Feel somewtat privileged to learn that my little creations connect at that level of human experience and carry meaning. Hoped for but to receive acknowledgement is deeply moving. I thank you sincerely.
M  Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Oh Paul…l find this poem “simply beautiful” it resonated with me and l truly felt and visualised it! A real feel good write for me! Debx
Willason Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 8:40 PM
Apologies for the long delay in acknowledging your kind words Deb. Have been in a place without windows...thankfully emerged. Many thanks as always, treasured.
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