Because of Your Love

BECAUSE OF YOUR LOVE 


Beneath the walls of mortal
Flesh,
An unyielding heart reverberates,
Defying age and claiming immortality, 
As your everlasting LOVE acclaims! 
 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
  26 AUGUST 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Roper Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Beautiful and romantic. Blessings dear friend
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 2:58 PM
beautiful in its brevity, D.. delicately woven!..:) huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:45 PM
So nice to see you again, Nette. Thank you for your visit! Brevity is philosophizing, used to say the ancient Greek philosophers, so I try to follow their example but in no avail!
Rain Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 2:46 PM
so much beauty in less words written .Excellent !
Trifiatis Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Your comment so gracious! Heart doesn't need many words to express love. It just feels love! Thank you so much for your visit!
Ellison Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Proud to call you a fellow countryman, my dear Demetrios! A beautiful poem about love... have a good day! Jack
Trifiatis Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:25 PM
That is an honor my good friend! Thank you for your visit and your gracious comment. If things in Greece get worse I might be coming back to my beloved Canada!
Carrillo Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:42 PM
This is very unique. Your words are captivating. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Trifiatis Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 12:22 AM
Thanks, very kind of you!
Phillips Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 10:48 AM
"Beneath the walls of mortal Flesh" A very beautiful, strong, and powerful line. Nice work of art. Keep them coming.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 2:54 PM
Thank you Christine your comment means a lot!
Sivey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:39 AM
This is such a beautiful and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem here this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a gorgeous and sentimental poem, Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Thank you my friend!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:21 AM
- A beautiful poem - Words that are good to bring along in life ... - Have a nice day, my friend Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:54 AM
My dear Anne-Lise, hope you had a nice weekend. Thank you for your visit, it is always a pleasure!
Manassian Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:25 AM
:) Demetrios...whenever I seek wisdom, I come here. Your wisdom about life, love, spirituality, and just about everything is captivating. Lovely lovely write, my dear poet. Blessings.....
Trifiatis Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:31 AM
Thank you my dearest poetess for your generous comments. You are an inspiration!
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