Because of You

i dont know what this new feeling is
its something i must have missed out on
this new thing feels my soul with bliss
nothing but a surprise, i begin to feel withdrawn

i cant handle so much tension
it is time to be forgiven
i thought it was good, i thought it was great
but all i did was take the bait

my emotions cant make up their mind
they are changing as often as the tide
you left pieces of my heart intertwined
you have made it anything but and easy ride

because of you i begin to beakdown
in my rhymes, i will drown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callandret Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 2:26 AM
Very good poem, love is strong and hard to compete.;)
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