beaver moon

coppery polish
	ravenous iron jaws yawn ~
		beaver befuddled
	
(November Full Moon – Algonquin)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Maverick Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 1:52 PM
You had me trapped on the trigger plate Linda-Alice.Its a good thing the moonbeam Was a strong one b t w' I managed to climb It up out of the trap, it was handy that you Ordered the dimpled finish, so there was no Slipping off,I was going to push on and drop Down to maitland..But that moondust! wheew Its powerful stuff, I awoke to the horrid sight Of u l e z signs and cold London rain..Again.) Not your fault.' No blame laid.! But can you do a Mystical river next time.? Its better on the sinuses.
Fowler Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 10:18 AM
You always make me smile Joe. So glad you stopped by and left a comment for me. Thank you! :)
Greenhough Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 5:51 PM
This is a great haiku. I like the reference to Algonquin culture.
Fowler Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Thanks Hilda. :)
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 10:41 AM
- Beautiful to look at the moon...especially the full moon, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Anne-Lise! Happy New Year. Keep smiling at our moons. They love that. :)
Tor Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Hi Linda so nice to read this today. Looking for that November Moon. Thanks for sharing...
Fowler Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 10:16 AM
Hi Michael. Happy you enjoyed this. Thank you :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:11 AM
Our close neighbour is always a great inspiration for us Linda. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Fowler Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 10:15 AM
All is well. Happy New Year Tom. :)
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