Beauty's Premise

Beauty is an empty premise Whose truth is sorely tested Valor's bell chimes crystal clear In quiet heroes is it nested

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Date: 1/24/2019 1:25:00 PM

Eloquent and profound, I don't find 'plastic' appearances too appealing, it's the hidden beauty that is valuable-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/24/2019 9:38:00 PM

So true. Thank you for the insight and the feedback, Michelle. Much appreciated. ~ Gershon

Date: 1/22/2019 12:43:00 PM

Beauty is as beauty treats others I think, and that is heroic, so this appeals to me.

Date: 1/22/2019 3:30:00 AM

all that glitters is not gold, yeah glittering is beautiful to an empty eye!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/22/2019 7:36:00 PM

Thank you for the comment, Mahtab. ~ Gershon

Date: 1/21/2019 9:14:00 PM

WOW!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/21/2019 9:31:00 PM

A word is worth a thousand pictures! Thank you so much, Bobby! ~ Gershon