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Beauty Within

I can see
a beautiful soul
 lies within me.
    Therefore,
    no mirror
   can reflect
who I really am.







 
For Giorgio Veneto's contest - "Laconic Verse"

beautyidentityimageinspirationalmirrorfree verse

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/21/2017 10:13:00 AM

Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/24/2017 2:47:00 PM

Thank you very much, Richard... A Merry Christmas to you and I wish you all the best for the New Year!

Morgan Badurak

Date: 11/25/2014 9:43:00 AM

Hi Kelly, I think this poem is amazing. I am creating a zine with elements to encourage self confidence and self discovery. Would you allow me to feature your poem in it? Thank you so much.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/26/2014 12:26:00 AM

Hi Morgan, thank you very much for the opportunity and for your kind comments. Yes, I will allow you to use my poem in your zine. It sounds like an interesting and exciting project to be a part of!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/6/2014 8:11:00 AM

This is lovely...congratulations on your wonderful win...

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2014 3:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Donna. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2014 6:20:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, kelly

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2014 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Ram. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2014 9:01:00 PM

I like this, Kelly. Good work! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/9/2014 2:24:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate you stopping by. :)

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2014 9:22:00 PM

Sweet win Kelly.....SKAT

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2014 5:12:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, as always, SKAT! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 5:44:00 PM

HI KELLY, , Congratulations, awesome VERSE! xox ~LINDA

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2014 5:10:00 PM

Hi Linda, thank you for your kind words, as always! :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/4/2014 12:32:00 PM

Bravo!!! ... very well expressed lines... so deep and awesome!!! Congratulations, Kelly!!! :o))

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2014 4:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, AiyaH. I really do appreciate your kind words! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2014 12:44:00 AM

Way to go in my contest.. I just knew I had seen this one somewhere before!!!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/5/2014 4:32:00 PM

Thank you very much for my placement, Andrea. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)

Robin Davis

Date: 3/14/2014 9:52:00 PM

Kelly Such a wonderfully written lesson on beauty. The only true beauty in someone is how they treat others and live life. I may not be beautiful outside--but am gorgeous inside. LOL Thanks for the wonderful comment on my One Plus One poem.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/15/2014 5:43:00 PM

I completely agree with you, Robin! True beauty is only found on the inside, not the outside. Unfortunately, the inner beauty is much harder for everyone to see! Thank you for the wonderful comments, Robin! :)

B. Maxine Revolution

Date: 2/6/2014 6:06:00 PM

You were right I did enjoy this I felt the confidence pouring out of this bite sized piece, just wonderful kelly :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/8/2014 5:03:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by to read my poem. I am so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you for the kind words, as well. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/23/2014 10:05:00 AM

This is fantastic, I just had to read this one when I seen the title. I am not dissapointed, well done Kelly!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/23/2014 10:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for the kind words, Richard! I am glad that you were so drawn to this one, and were not disappointed with the poem itself. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 12:47:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Kelly.... Very deep, for a small verse.. Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2013 3:18:00 PM

thanks for telling me about your acquaintance with depression, or someone who has it. Yes, it is quite the thing to live with!!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/19/2013 4:01:00 PM

Yes it is, Andrea, you never know which "personality" you are going to get each day. It would be great if there were a real cure for depression.

Len Gasun

Date: 12/1/2013 3:52:00 AM

Wow I love this! Going to my fave. Thank you so much for sharing! My hearty congratulations on your great win my dear friend Kelly! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/2/2013 6:56:00 PM

Thank you, Leonora! I really do appreciate the fave! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 9:41:00 PM

I LOVE this one. Excellent terse verse. Congrats.