Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

Beauty Transcending

From my window I watched, enthralled
as feathery fliers fell and lay sprawled.
Safe from the heated warmth of me,
a flock of snowflakes in Winter flurry.
Ice crystals afloat, serenely descending.
Each one unique; beauty transcending



Bite Size Poem no27 Contest by Line Gauthier
Posted on November 22, 2021

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Joanna Daniel November 24, 2021 at 5:02 AM Beauty in your lines here, Lin, a winner in my eyes:) never seen snow, sure must be enchanting:) Lin Lane November 29, 2021 at 4:03 AM oh what a joy it would be for you to stand and let it fall gently on your face. You WOULD be enchanted! I appreciate your sweet comments, Jo.

Lindsay Laurie November 23, 2021 at 2:40 PM Hello Lin ... nice picture view in words for someone who has rarely seen snow - thank you Lin - Lindsay Lin Lane November 29, 2021 at 4:02 AM The first snow is always the most beautiful, Lindsay. It's remarkable that each feathery flake is unique. Thanks so much for liking my write.

Gordon Mcconnell November 23, 2021 at 11:45 AM Lovely piece Lin, such great imagery and insightful line of thought. Blessings,Gordon ?? Lin Lane November 29, 2021 at 4:00 AM Thanks a lot for your gracious thoughts, Gordon.

Regina Mcintosh November 22, 2021 at 6:09 PM Beautiful write. Love it. God bless you, Love, Gina Lin Lane November 29, 2021 at 4:00 AM I appreciate your kindness, Gina.

Kim Rodrigues November 22, 2021 at 4:52 PM Lovely imagery! Lin Lane November 29, 2021 at 4:00 AM Thanks so much, Kim.