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Beauty Spot

Remember those days I thought to tell you all my untold aforethought; but each time when we met, your beauty spot diverted mind, all efforts led to naught, couldn't say a word; very well knew I ought to share what thinking pops up distraught and confused I'm; Can you express what's your thought; yes, I failed. Untold dreams need to be brought to your heart. But, when I think of you, got positive vibes; appears you had soft spot for me; see knowing that also my thought remains with me; conscious of what I ought to tell you; looking at your beauty spot, well rehearsed monologue I just forgot; Can you help? ~X~X~X~
The Lannet was created by Laura Lamarca and is a form of a sonnet. Its form consists of: - 14 lines -10 syllables per line – simple syllabic meter is sufficient – stressed-meter (iambic, etc is not required) - No end-line rhyming is required, however - internal rhyming is permitted. - A specific stanza requirement is not stated. Pasted from http://poetscollective.org/everysonnet/lannet/ Thanks to the efforts of Mr. Lawrence Eberhart for a wonderful resource at Poets COLLECTIVE site.

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Date: 11/19/2021 12:31:00 PM
Hello Pratap, you were over joyed and the words you wanted to say just would not come out. Because the feeling was strong. Blessings.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/21/2021 11:33:00 AM
Hello Pratap,your welcome my friend. Blessings. Darlene
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Pratap Roy
Date: 11/20/2021 9:06:00 PM
Thank you Darlene for your advice. God bless you.

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