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Beauty Spills

the mountains unfold
              my dreams in layers of hills
                where the beauty spills

Heidi Sands

10/5/17

beautydreammountainshaiku

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Kim Rodrigues

October 6, 2017 at 2:51 PM

Pretty!

Heidi Sands

October 6, 2017 at 3:10 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Russell Sivey

October 6, 2017 at 8:52 AM

I wish I could see the hills where you live, i have flat land here! If I go southeast I can hit hilly country, but the mountains that you have aren't here! I am impressed with your beautiful write my friend! I surely enjoyed reading it this morning! Such a fascinating piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands

October 6, 2017 at 8:56 AM

It would be nice if you could see mountains Russell. They are so beautiful. Thank you for your kind comment on this ! :)

Susan Ashley

October 5, 2017 at 7:26 PM

A haiku of lovely imagery Heidi. Each line is a beautiful facet of your poetic gem. Well done and enjoyed! :)

Heidi Sands

October 5, 2017 at 7:28 PM

Thank you so much Susan :)

Joseph May

October 5, 2017 at 6:11 PM

Wonderful haiku Heidi..best wishes

Heidi Sands

October 5, 2017 at 6:24 PM

Thank you, Joseph . I appreciate your comment :)

Kevin Shaw

October 5, 2017 at 5:34 PM

Nice flowing little Haiku, This is a difficult form of poetry to convey,, because it leaves a lot to the readers imagination. You seem to have mastered the art, regards, Kevin xx

Heidi Sands

October 5, 2017 at 5:50 PM

Thank you Kevin :)