Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Beauty Sings Eternally Grateful

Sure as the cherry blossoms flutter whispers 
upon a winds breath gently dances lace 
pink softens petal wrapped cotton silk 
winds whisper when Christmas falls 
unfolding a white blanket reversed undying 
cold melts frozen ice cap exposed life 

As the ferry man always calls tricks 
chills piercing icicles crystal clear cut 
cracks appear under a surface cross 
mirrors of destiny from the salted ocean 
we pay homage with our dewdrops sparkle 

Recollecting time falling back 
counting down past sins
kissing your feet in each step forward 
Forever adds up to precious memories 
searching the stars fallen burning fire explains all
where dust remains upon a magic wish blown freely 

Always light of our Saviour comes 
crowing heavens sky supernova 
star of all stars prince of peace 
enters a King's blessing 
so comforting warm alone with you Lord 
joyous angels of Grace forever holds 
the highest of all notes chanting 
brightly upon one treasured gift Temple 
Ark of the covenant I believe in you

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Ravi Sathasivam December 15, 2016 at 7:39 AM Excellent poem with deep thoughts. Enjoyed reading it.

Akkina Downing December 14, 2016 at 5:32 PM I've always admire people who believes in God. It highlights my faith to a another level. Thank you for this piece, it's an uplifting message to read :) God bless you and have Merry one :)

Dorian Petersen Potter December 12, 2016 at 5:36 PM Hi Liam!Wow! Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful n' outstanding spiritual poem, that you have written here my dearest friend Liam.Very deep and spiritual about our Lord n' Savior Jesus Christ.Very beautifully written piece Liam.Just awesome!I truly enjoyed it!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!Just dazzling!Excellent imagery! Wonderful piece! Just beautiful!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + + !A fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic, gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're much better in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your Faith!And keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))I really hope that you're feeling much better n' recovering a lot more from your very sad n' tragic accident, Liam.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2016 at 4:47 PM - A wonderful poem, deep thoughts my friend Liam - As the soul is new born and clean - hugs // Anne-Lise :)