Beauty Scent

As I lie here on my bed,
time stands still
sorrow and compassion enter the room,
as my mind empties 
For nothing now is sweeter than your scent,
Which is as strong as mother nature's beauty,
on a sunny day
your smile is like the moon,
it glows
your touch is as gentle
as a feather
your presence is like,
no other
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Hi William! welcome to the soup! and thanks for your kind comments! what I like about this fine write is the twist in line three....searching the sorrow and compassion amid the beautiful memories, ....sumthin's brewin' ; ) keep inkin' brother!!!~ jim
Fraser Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Nice poem William, welcome to the Soup>>James
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 7:33 AM
sorrow and compassion enter the room-->Awsome!
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