Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Beauty of You

Engaged in the beauty of you
a lilac scent of splendor sent
drowning my every thought
in the ripples of your rush

Float deep into my western sky
grab hold of this fluid destiny
and smother my spirit with your 
demure simplicity and innocence
Laisse mes lèvres sur ton cœur

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Jean Murray January 11, 2017 at 1:30 PM "the ripples of your rush". Speaks volumes to me. Love is in the air.

Chris Green January 10, 2017 at 9:02 AM Now this is romantic poetry. So beautiful and heart touching. Definitely some swooning going on below here. :) Captcha is TYM. : )

Charmaine Chircop January 10, 2017 at 8:04 AM How romantic and beautiful..'Smother my spirit with your demure simplicity'..WOW..'Float deep into my Western Sky'...Lovely..A definite favourite..CC

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2017 at 6:02 AM the beauty and gentleness of your poem Tim, :) I like the finale. :D! yes, i am adjusting to the cold but glad that it's been sunny :D! Smiles!// Olive Eloisa ;)

Jan Allison January 10, 2017 at 2:23 AM oh that final line how how beautiful Tim ever the romantic my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White January 10, 2017 at 1:31 AM How I love it that you ended with a sentence in French! This is a beautiful poem, and I add it to my favourites.