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Beauty of You

Engaged in the beauty of you a lilac scent of splendor sent drowning my every thought in the ripples of your rush Float deep into my western sky grab hold of this fluid destiny and smother my spirit with your demure simplicity and innocence Laisse mes lèvres sur ton cœur

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/11/2017 1:30:00 PM
"the ripples of your rush". Speaks volumes to me. Love is in the air.
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Date: 1/10/2017 9:02:00 AM
Now this is romantic poetry. So beautiful and heart touching. Definitely some swooning going on below here. :) Captcha is TYM. : )
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Date: 1/10/2017 8:04:00 AM
How romantic and beautiful..'Smother my spirit with your demure simplicity'..WOW..'Float deep into my Western Sky'...Lovely..A definite favourite..CC
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Date: 1/10/2017 6:02:00 AM
the beauty and gentleness of your poem Tim, :) I like the finale. :D! yes, i am adjusting to the cold but glad that it's been sunny :D! Smiles!// Olive Eloisa ;)
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Date: 1/10/2017 2:23:00 AM
oh that final line how how beautiful Tim ever the romantic my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/10/2017 1:31:00 AM
How I love it that you ended with a sentence in French! This is a beautiful poem, and I add it to my favourites.
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