Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Beauty of Jubilation

There’s pleasure beyond measure in the creation of elation,
light and delight in the moment of a cheerful sensation-
More gladness, less sadness in the beauty of jubilation, 
and in the abyss of bliss there’s joyful exhilaration. 


Rhyme Battle: Happiness Round 8
August 10th, 2017

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Gregory Richard Barden October 7, 2017 at 1:23 AM Really creative and sweet, Laura - you're at the top of so many winner's lists - and you SHOULD be! Blessings and congrats on another, my friend! :-) <3

Shirley Rebstock October 5, 2017 at 7:33 AM Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed your write.

Constance La France October 4, 2017 at 2:05 PM Laura, congratulations on your wonderful win !

Juli- Michelle October 4, 2017 at 1:23 PM Laura, sorry it took so long, but I loved the beautiful internal rhyme you used, and your theme of happiness *jubilation*! Congrats on your first place win! Love, Juli-Michelle

Dale Gregory Cozart August 10, 2017 at 4:01 PM Hi, Laura. Beautiful. Since you're in a contest, in your third line you have two "in's" when you might only need one. Anyway, GL in the contest.