Liam Mcdaid Poet Terza Rima

Beauty Kisses the Beast

Sun golden shining warm upon the back speaks
wind cutting cold chills freezing thoughts held
captivating love standing a vigil faraway dream

Touching warm fingers of light in a deep blue painted sky
bewitching clouds gunbarrel grey shooting magic wishes
silver shading arrow points out into the softest peach charms spells

Everything spellbinding shines amazing beautiful enchanting 
snow covered mountains cold winds howling and whistling tunes
bells in the distance calls you're the rock one clings to on Trawbrega's shores

Drawing behind the eyes wind bellowing whispers a blessing tides turn waves
inside joy burns one candle warmly flickering happiness butterflies dance
blue blazes to see the soul of a deeply treasured jewel forever sings



unrhymed tercet

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Fotosafari Films April 27, 2016 at 12:07 PM Excellent! I may have some film footage to complement your work. Hang on... I'll post something and give you the link.

J Hamilton Gist January 4, 2016 at 1:45 PM Unrhymed tercet sounding like it rhymes for some reason. Good Job!

Payal Saxena December 1, 2015 at 12:02 PM Good imagination

Probir Gupta December 1, 2015 at 4:26 AM Am delighted. Procession of images/ setting out the bird from the cages.

Beejadhur Sewumber November 29, 2015 at 11:27 PM Descriptive and quite informative poem, I like the alliteration

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis November 29, 2015 at 10:22 PM A journey of enchanted images galore. New and interesting form, Liam.Thanks for sharing.

Ralph Sergi November 29, 2015 at 11:45 AM Hi Liam: A beautiful compendium of imagery and words. My compliments!

Prasad Bolimeru November 29, 2015 at 10:28 AM beautiful---

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 26, 2015 at 2:58 AM Superb imagery and writing wow!!!! Thanks for sharing Liam..:) Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 4:14 PM thank you kindly olive dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Vera Duggan January 26, 2015 at 12:58 AM Beautiful Liam, loved every line, never heard of this form before but I liked it, keep them coming..Take care my friend............Vera........... Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 4:12 PM ahh vera your always so sweet thank you kindly wishing you and peter a great weekend bless you both

Shadow Hamilton January 23, 2015 at 12:40 PM magnificence visual and imagery Liam love it hugs 7 + fav Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 4:09 PM hi pal great to see you wishing you a great weekend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 21, 2015 at 8:22 AM "the soul of a deeply treasured jewel forever sings" always..innovative. succinct, warming...love liam for your gift>rajat Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 4:05 PM the gift was the treasure who opened the heart wonderful comment dear pal bless you with a smile

Tim Smith January 20, 2015 at 11:40 PM Very impressive my friend....cheers Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 3:51 PM thank you tim but the title is the truth smiling pal wishing you a great weekend

Gary Bateman January 20, 2015 at 2:36 PM Hello Liam Mate!! What can I say here, except that this is a most exceptional Tercet write. (Glad to see you're using this particular poetic format. I like to use it too, as you know!!) The combination of your choice of words, coupled with imagery are truly enchanting Mate!! A definite "7" and a FAV in the Leprechaun Book on this one!! Best Wishes Mate, Gary Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 3:47 PM yeah your pointing me in different areas garry thank you pal for the golden beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

M. L. Kiser January 20, 2015 at 1:58 PM Well it must have a '7'; a beautiful write, indeed. Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 3:45 PM thank you ever so kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2015 at 12:47 PM - Ask anyone what love is, no response will be equal - Love is the strongest of all passions ..... if you ask me - A beautiful poem Liam !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 3:42 PM and the most powerful and forgiving wonderful comment dear pal deeply appreciated bless you have a great weekend

Dorian Petersen Potter January 20, 2015 at 7:54 AM Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friend. smiling. Just awesome! A very solid 7 +++ ++ from me! A very romantic and passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I enjoy it!Your pen is mighty golden! To me you're the best! Have a very lovely day! God bless you and be with you always! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.^O^" Liam Mcdaid January 30, 2015 at 3:39 PM thank you dorian dear friend for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you