Beauty Kisses the Beast

Sun golden shining warm upon the back speaks
wind cutting cold chills freezing thoughts held
captivating love standing a vigil faraway dream

Touching warm fingers of light in a deep blue painted sky
bewitching clouds gunbarrel grey shooting magic wishes
silver shading arrow points out into the softest peach charms spells

Everything spellbinding shines amazing beautiful enchanting 
snow covered mountains cold winds howling and whistling tunes
bells in the distance calls you're the rock one clings to on Trawbrega's shores

Drawing behind the eyes wind bellowing whispers a blessing tides turn waves
inside joy burns one candle warmly flickering happiness butterflies dance
blue blazes to see the soul of a deeply treasured jewel forever sings



unrhymed tercet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/27/2016 12:07:00 PM
Excellent! I may have some film footage to complement your work. Hang on... I'll post something and give you the link.
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:45:00 PM
Unrhymed tercet sounding like it rhymes for some reason. Good Job!
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Date: 12/1/2015 12:02:00 PM
Good imagination
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Date: 12/1/2015 4:26:00 AM
Am delighted. Procession of images/ setting out the bird from the cages.
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:27:00 PM
Descriptive and quite informative poem, I like the alliteration
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:22:00 PM
A journey of enchanted images galore. New and interesting form, Liam.Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/29/2015 11:45:00 AM
Hi Liam: A beautiful compendium of imagery and words. My compliments!
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:28:00 AM
beautiful---
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:58:00 AM
Superb imagery and writing wow!!!! Thanks for sharing Liam..:)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 4:14:00 PM
thank you kindly olive dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 1/26/2015 12:58:00 AM
Beautiful Liam, loved every line, never heard of this form before but I liked it, keep them coming..Take care my friend............Vera...........
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 4:12:00 PM
ahh vera your always so sweet thank you kindly wishing you and peter a great weekend bless you both
Date: 1/23/2015 12:40:00 PM
magnificence visual and imagery Liam love it hugs 7 + fav
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 4:09:00 PM
hi pal great to see you wishing you a great weekend
Date: 1/21/2015 8:22:00 AM
"the soul of a deeply treasured jewel forever sings" always..innovative. succinct, warming...love liam for your gift>rajat
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 4:05:00 PM
the gift was the treasure who opened the heart wonderful comment dear pal bless you with a smile
Date: 1/20/2015 11:40:00 PM
Very impressive my friend....cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 3:51:00 PM
thank you tim but the title is the truth smiling pal wishing you a great weekend
Date: 1/20/2015 2:36:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! What can I say here, except that this is a most exceptional Tercet write. (Glad to see you're using this particular poetic format. I like to use it too, as you know!!) The combination of your choice of words, coupled with imagery are truly enchanting Mate!! A definite "7" and a FAV in the Leprechaun Book on this one!! Best Wishes Mate, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 3:47:00 PM
yeah your pointing me in different areas garry thank you pal for the golden beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 1/20/2015 1:58:00 PM
Well it must have a '7'; a beautiful write, indeed.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 3:45:00 PM
thank you ever so kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 1/20/2015 12:47:00 PM
- Ask anyone what love is, no response will be equal - Love is the strongest of all passions ..... if you ask me - A beautiful poem Liam !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 3:42:00 PM
and the most powerful and forgiving wonderful comment dear pal deeply appreciated bless you have a great weekend
Date: 1/20/2015 7:54:00 AM
Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friend. smiling. Just awesome! A very solid 7 +++ ++ from me! A very romantic and passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I enjoy it!Your pen is mighty golden! To me you're the best! Have a very lovely day! God bless you and be with you always! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxo D.^O^"
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/30/2015 3:39:00 PM
thank you dorian dear friend for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you
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