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Beauty Inside

Through birth, adolescents, and then through youth
The shapes and colors all remain so new
The shine adheres without dissipating
No rust, nor mar, perfection not fading

A house but built the day before
No cobwebs cling, no warped squeaky floors
All plumbing flows freely, no clogs in sight
All wiring neat and works just right
No chips in the paint
No brown withered weeds
All who look will love 
the beauty they see

As all things age, as entropy takes hold
People too, inevitably grow old
Our plumbing leaks
Our paint gets chipped
We try our best to keep all fixed and fit
To hide the signs
Of a life well lived
For people who love beauty
Ugliness is hard to forgive

Limitations, weakness, 
cause us to feel ashamed
When truly, it's our looks that are vain
So please, think again before judging looks
For that beat up old building
Hides the beauty age took
Inside cracked windows, if we care to peer
We'd see strong bones not fancy veneers
And a home that holds sweet memories of love
And years doing good, we forget to think of

For youth surely is gorgeous, shiny, and new
But no one yet lived here to know what you've been through
The emptiness of before will now be filled with pictures on walls
And tears in bedrooms, laughter in the halls
So while time decays to the world outside
It gets soaked into our hearts,Putting that beauty inside. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/29/2024 9:01:00 AM
Dear Crystol, What a great read, especially for us that are aging and see those around us changing. Sometimes it seems like a curse and then other times it is such a blessing. I know that God is in control and I am not. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/28/2024 5:52:00 AM
Awesome look at the aging process and what really matters about a person. Reminds me a bit of Ecclesiastes ch 12. Looking forward to the day when the aging process is reversed - under God's kingdom
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/28/2024 5:56:00 PM
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/28/2024 5:39:00 PM
Amen brother Tom! I mean that sincerely. What is your belief about gender in the eternity? Oh.kinda a big question for a little comment huh. Well pm me if you feel like a theological discussion! ;) xoxo

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