Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Villanelle

Beauty In Life Spontaneity

Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined
Experiences uncovers blues and rhymes one couldn't find
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned

Culture, law, ethics and education; man learns and understand
Defining, refining and reminding they try to do to mankind
Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined

Attempt to break traditions,"outside tries", don't be confined
Falling and committing mistakes will not leave anyone behind
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned

Reach for something in the distance, consider a wise stand
Drench without inhibitions, "LA VITA E BELLA" bear in mind
Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined

Anxieties, fear, poverty and inferiority they can blind
Yet, live! live! embrace whole life! don't ever decline! 
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned

Remember! NOT everyone can be given a fair second chance
Affectionate at heart and sagacious mind, manage to combine 
Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned


BY:
olive_eloi
2:14 am
03/28/2014

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 6, 2014 at 2:56 AM Beautifully penned! Congrats on your victory!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 6, 2014 at 5:03 AM thank you so much for the visit.. :) i appreciate it.. :)

Skat A April 3, 2014 at 10:17 PM OLIVE, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 6, 2014 at 5:02 AM thanks sKat.. :) nice visit of you.. :)

Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2014 at 1:14 PM nice win... PD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 6, 2014 at 5:00 AM Thank you so much for passing by :) to God be the greatest glory.. :D

Toquyen Harrell March 29, 2014 at 9:27 AM Yes, live. I like "not everyone can be given a fair second chance". Not everyone gets a second chance. Go or bust :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 31, 2014 at 7:23 AM thank you for the visit.. :) i appreciate it.. :) to GOd be the greatest glory.. :)

Sara Kendrick March 28, 2014 at 5:45 PM These are no so easy to write but it seems that you can pull them off with ease..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 31, 2014 at 7:17 AM i really just give it a try Sara.. :D thanks for the visit ... I really appreciate it.. :D to God be the glory.. :)

Paul Callus March 28, 2014 at 3:24 PM Wow Olive_eloi ! Also a philosopher deep down :) and written in an assertive, powerful way. Somewhat different from the latest posts. enjoyed. // paul Paul Callus April 4, 2014 at 11:22 AM Congrats on fine win Olive_eloi. You merit every bit of it :) :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 28, 2014 at 3:57 PM thanks for the visit Paul.. :) happy weekend to you and your family.. :) to God be the greatest glory.. :)