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Beauty In Life Spontaneity

Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined
Experiences uncovers blues and rhymes one couldn't find
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned

Culture, law, ethics and education; man learns and understand
Defining, refining and reminding they try to do to mankind
Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined

Attempt to break traditions,"outside tries", don't be confined
Falling and committing mistakes will not leave anyone behind
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned

Reach for something in the distance, consider a wise stand
Drench without inhibitions, "LA VITA E BELLA" bear in mind
Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined

Anxieties, fear, poverty and inferiority they can blind
Yet, live! live! embrace whole life! don't ever decline! 
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned

Remember! NOT everyone can be given a fair second chance
Affectionate at heart and sagacious mind, manage to combine 
Blank pages of life - spontaneous, unscripted, undefined
Begin to indite, though endings pave unsure and unplanned


BY:
olive_eloi
2:14 am
03/28/2014

CONTEST: Rhyme Battle: Round 4 Free Poetry Contest Details
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 4/6/2014 2:56:00 AM Beautifully penned! Congrats on your victory!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/6/2014 5:03:00 AM thank you so much for the visit.. :) i appreciate it.. :)

Skat A Date: 4/3/2014 10:17:00 PM OLIVE, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/6/2014 5:02:00 AM thanks sKat.. :) nice visit of you.. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/3/2014 1:14:00 PM nice win... PD Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/6/2014 5:00:00 AM Thank you so much for passing by :) to God be the greatest glory.. :D

Toquyen Harrell Date: 3/29/2014 9:27:00 AM Yes, live. I like "not everyone can be given a fair second chance". Not everyone gets a second chance. Go or bust :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/31/2014 7:23:00 AM thank you for the visit.. :) i appreciate it.. :) to GOd be the greatest glory.. :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/28/2014 5:45:00 PM These are no so easy to write but it seems that you can pull them off with ease..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/31/2014 7:17:00 AM i really just give it a try Sara.. :D thanks for the visit ... I really appreciate it.. :D to God be the glory.. :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/28/2014 3:24:00 PM Wow Olive_eloi ! Also a philosopher deep down :) and written in an assertive, powerful way. Somewhat different from the latest posts. enjoyed. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/4/2014 11:22:00 AM Congrats on fine win Olive_eloi. You merit every bit of it :) :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/28/2014 3:57:00 PM thanks for the visit Paul.. :) happy weekend to you and your family.. :) to God be the greatest glory.. :)