Beauty In a Storm

ocean squall at dawn
                         brilliant rainbows burst through clouds
                                   nature's high drama

                   Wind whipped waves tumble over rocky shores
                      pounding the beach in a gathering storm.

                      A red flag flaps wildly in gusty winds
                     warning sailors to avoid perilous seas.

                      Crimson rays blaze across the horizon
                       in a grand burst of reflective splendor.
                  Seagulls draft high winds as raindrops come
                     drumming musical notes, a watery score 
                  as stunning rainbows light the sky once more.









Written on 11/4/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Thomas Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 9:42 AM
You had me standing in this powerful storm. You filled this brief poem with an amazing imagery Laura!
Merryman Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 11:05 PM
Great imagery, Laura! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:11 AM
loved the haiku in the beginning! caught my eye right away- sorry for the delayed comment! thank you :)-luloo
A  Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Laura, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
Bhurani Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 9:40 AM
So lyrical and colourful,enjoyed reading it
Godwin Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:29 PM
Very pretty, Laura - CayCay
Leiser Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, CayCay :)
Cw Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 1:00 AM
Aahh, Laura I really love this impressive poem of yours I'm giving you a 7x7 and a big FAVING it. You always write so beautiful. huggs Theresa
Leiser Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Thank you so very much for your high compliment, Theresa! it was very encouraging to me :)
Lawless Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Laura, I think the first couplet is supposed to be rhymed. Like the take on the theme.
Leiser Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Thanks, John, but I think I'm done. I've spent too much time on this and have writer's block ;)
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