Beauty In a Bubble

she smiles behind
the bubble
it's shimmery translucence
enhances her
enticingly out of reach
yet i reach out
touching the bubble, i notice
its firmness
but not hard like stone
it's supple
like youthful skin
that can be pierced
and its life giving blood released
her smile falters
has i remove my hand
from the bubble
we talk some more
her laughter is infectious
i lose all track of time
watching, listening, and learning
but later has we say goodbye
i am the one smiling
smiling because i know
that i will return tomorrow
but this time with a safety pin
so i can bust that %@!#$! bubble
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 8:07 PM
How witty and clever you are with your magnificent work Brian. Enjoyed this much!
Chircop Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 3:33 PM
yeah im reading this one now,i'm watching listening and learning too-cos a lot is written here-it flows wonderfully-i can lend you a safety pin-smile;-)-charma
Strand Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 1:12 AM
Great imaginative write Brian with a twist,Fine work here.Rgds Brian
Davis Avatar
March 5, 2009 at 3:01 PM
That last line gave me a chuckle...very cleverly written. - Monique
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