Beauty From Him We Derive

Who am I not to excuse and forgive
when the Solo God, His mercy would give.

Rage inside, I plead to God to erase
though much of pain has on the face left trace.

All the seasons barged into Springtime
and the Rose has to keep her scent sublime.

The birds would chirp and hail a rising dawn
as night would echo the woes of a swan.

Mind and heart are forever friends and foes
heart sins and mind reasons, one to dispose !

Sweet bitter life! blest to taste and survive
The Mighty, Beauty from Him we derive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Williams Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:36 AM
God inspired words from above, and indeed He has placed His unique golden pen in your hands to pass on these truly inspirational words...'Sweet bitter life! blest to taste and survive The Mighty, Beauty from Him we derive'. Indeed you have my dear sweet friend Besma. A fave for my list....Maria Hugs
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May 15, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Love.. kindness.. support and the light you bring into my path of poetry is a blessing, dearest Maria.. I thank you heaps for your generosity and humility.. always a tremendous pleasure to see you on my page.. warmest wishes.. Blessings. Love and hugs.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:45 PM
This inspired write shows your true beauty Besma. May your enlightened spirit long endure. This poem is a gift of love! Thank you! : ) xxoo
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Your kindness, love and beauty do inspire my soul, dear Connie.. always grateful to you for such wholehearted words that I highly value and cherish into my heart.. thank you so much for your graceful presence.. blessings. Love and hugs.
Proxenos Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 2:17 PM
I Have revisited this poem Besma as I read it differently this time, but however I read it you are Blessed by Him the Divine to write such faithful poems. Hugs soul sister Jennifer.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 4:55 PM
I'm indeed blessed by God to have you as a soul sister, a dear friend and a genuine poetess.. my pleasure, dearest Jenny.. thank you so much for being here to read and support.. blessings. Love and hugs.
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May 14, 2019 at 2:12 PM
So True Besma my friend, heart sins and mind reasons ........ forever foes ...... Life is sweet and bitter .... such heartfelt sincere thoughts - we are however blessed by Him the Mighty and Beauty from him we derive so meaningful a poem man is but human, but for Him alone do we survive. Hugs dear Besma, Jennifer.
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May 15, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Dearest Jennifer, I'm tremendously happy as my words have flowed into your warm heart and touched your feel.. amazing is your feedback on my humble poem.. you fill up my soul with great joy! Thank you so much, soul sister.. warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Michael Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:16 AM
Poetry... Well done....Enjoyed it
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 3:31 PM
My pleasure, Arturo.. I'm happy you enjoyed my humble work. Thank you so much. Blessings.
Messina Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 7:57 PM
So beautiful, Besma. Your heart and faith in god blossoms through every touching line. God bless you and all in your life...My deepest love & respect...CM
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 12:55 PM
I'm deeply honoured and humbled by your sincere words and praise.. thank you so much, Charles, for being here on my page to support and encourage my humble work. My deepest regards and blessings.
Proxenos Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 1:25 PM
A poem of absolute faith in The Divine. Dear Besma, you have penned a beautiful creative and heartfelt write - I admire your poetic skills and talent - I could not write and present these profound thoughts that you pen on poetry soup. My soulfelt admiration. Brilliant poem! Hugs, Jennifer.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 12:51 PM
I admire the beauty of your soul, your generosity and humility dearest Jenny.. your words are so precious.. they bring a lot of joy into my soul and uplift my pen to a higher beauty we aspire to.. thank you so much, soul sister, my love and hugs.
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 3:08 PM
this lustrous poem comes from one who can access her higher self... i admire your truisms, besma... huggs
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 12:38 PM
You overwhelm me with your kind and supportive words, dear Nette.. Such honest appreciation adds a lot to my humble poetry.. warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
One Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 12:16 PM
A beautiful poem Besma, how many of his favours can you deny... A beautiful poem about faith..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Thank you so much, Silent One, for your so much appreciated visit and your praising words.. always honoured and grateful.. deepest regards and blessings.
Lindley Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 4:43 PM
My dear friend, what such exceptional and very beautiful six couplets you have given us in this exquisite gem! A fav.. a superbly crafted rendering of Life, Faith Truth and Man's place in this too oft dark world!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 6:07 AM
My honour and pleasure to have you read and value my humble work, Robert.. I'm deeply grateful for the kind feedback and genuine support.. thank you so much. Deepest regards. God bless you.
Warrior Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 8:49 AM
A heavenly read my dear Besma...you truly are an ambassador of the Divine...I bow...^WW^
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 6:04 AM
A great delight to read such honouring words, Winged Warrior.. I'm deeply humbled.. I so much appreciate your generous support.. thank you so much.. deepest regards and blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 12:14 PM
So true Besma, beauty does indeed come from God. Beautifully written couplets that can each stand on there own. Tom
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 5:04 AM
I'm glad and always grateful, Tom, for your honouring visits and encouraging feedbacks.. Your appreciative words are highly appreciated. Thank you so much. Deepest regards and blessings.
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May 1, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Much wisdom and life lessons in these verses you wrote, Besma. I felt genuine serenity ..a prayer of sorts.. in your cherubic words. I am saving your couplets as my FAVE.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 5:01 AM
Genuine and generous is your response to my humble poetry, dear Vijay! My utmost pleasure and a level I aspire to, to have a highly talented poet read and feel my humble words.. thank you so much. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.
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