Beauty Exposed

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The redbud covered with lavender Beauty exposed by a golden sun Morn's cold damp air saturated With crows, coos, cheer-up sounds So pleasant the surroundings On this cold crisp spring day Nature offers entertainment If we stop and look at its display So grand a visualization Soft the tunes so grand Much better than TV's line-up Mostly the same, all canned The news either horror stories Or lies on the political front A station putting down our leaders They love to tromp on Trump Where is the respect for authority Even if the one who's there deserves none Should we not respect the office If you don't like them why don't you run?

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Charlie Smith

Date: 3/9/2018 4:44:00 PM

Quite a departure on this site to read anything that shows respect for the presidency. Refreshing actually, your opinion is as valid anyone's. Enjoyed the read Sara...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/10/2018 5:53:00 AM

Charlie, Thanks for dropping by and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate the time spent here. The office of the president should be respected and people should do so. The men who go in there should try to live a life above but we are all humans who make mistakes in our lives and the job of each of us is to forgive those mistakes. Sometimes that is not easy. Making mistakes is the easy part of life isn't it. Sara

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/9/2018 4:25:00 PM

Not everybody can run for the respected office, like not everyone can do a surgery or build a bridge. It requires some know how, education, experience. You started with exposing a true beauty and left us with tromping the Trump. The office is nothing when the officer is a womanizer, a liar... more than 25 people resigned from their offices in the white house because of him. Good write regardless.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2018 4:32:00 PM

Pashang, Thanks for your frank opinion of my work and the topic. We all have our opinion and yours is valid one. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. I write out on the porch sometimes and it is something about the day and what is running around in my head trying to let go of some things that are troubling me. Sara

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/8/2018 6:25:00 AM

It s a really nice written poem and an enjoyable one to read, well as for office,there is a system of democracy, we ourselves choose the president and then we face the consequences, if we don t like a person, just don t vote it, but still things are way bad especially in Pakistan, in last elections there was alot of rigging, the result totally shock the Pakistan, same happens in America I guess because people were keen to see Clinton,anyway it was a really nice write

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/8/2018 9:19:00 AM

Faraz, Well, some people in America are totally unhappy with the end results of the election outcome as far as president goes. However, as you say we can cast out vote and we know that whoever gets the most electoral votes get the reward of being in office. Thanks for your visit to my page and taking time to comment. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2018 8:38:00 AM

- I've just been on a long walk in wet snow ... not run anymore today :) - We should have respect for authority, Sara - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/8/2018 9:16:00 AM

SS, I can imagine that would be cold and uncomfortable but I guess since you live where the winters are like that you are prepared for the weather. Yes, we should have respect for authority unless it is like some people we have seen in history who were doing what was totally wrong. Thanks for stopping by. Sra

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/6/2018 4:08:00 PM

Run where? Just kidding...A beautiful intro to this poem...one channel that would fill our lives with joy...All the best Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2018 8:19:00 AM

Michael, Thanks for dropping by. Your comments added a bit of humor to day. Sara