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Beauty Continues To Shine

One yellow flower Stands alone in the garden Pretty, golden, bright Even in the loneliness Beauty continues to shine Heidi Sands 8/9/17

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Dean Wood

Date: 8/10/2017 12:44:00 PM

A brave soul. True to its creators intention. A nice little poem Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/10/2017 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Dean :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/9/2017 1:04:00 PM

Even one flower breathes life! In our sorrows we might cling to one lonely flower!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 1:09:00 PM

Yes, that is true Kim. Thanks for your visit :)

Anna Hopper

Date: 8/9/2017 10:41:00 AM

Beautiful

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 10:49:00 AM

Thank you, Anna :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/9/2017 7:49:00 AM

That is sweet Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Arturo :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/9/2017 7:36:00 AM

Beauty needs no company...A lovely tanka Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 7:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Joseph :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2017 7:17:00 AM

Wow, this is an amazing write my friend! I REALLY loved this one! You have mastered the art of the Tanka within this poem and utilized it wonderfully! What an awesome poem, such a magnificent piece...you have impressed me completely! I shouldn't be surprised as you are a wonderful poet, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 7:22:00 AM

Hi Russell. I appreciate that. I have only done a couple Tanka with practicing these new forms. You have been kind to give encouraging feedback. Thank you :)