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Beauty Continues To Shine

One yellow flower
Stands alone in the garden
Pretty, golden, bright
Even in the loneliness
Beauty continues to shine

Heidi Sands

8/9/17

beautyflowerlonelinesstanka

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Dean Wood

August 10, 2017 at 12:44 PM

A brave soul. True to its creators intention. A nice little poem Heidi.

Heidi Sands

August 10, 2017 at 1:19 PM

Thank you Dean :)

Kim Rodrigues

August 9, 2017 at 1:04 PM

Even one flower breathes life! In our sorrows we might cling to one lonely flower!

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 1:09 PM

Yes, that is true Kim. Thanks for your visit :)

Anna Hopper

August 9, 2017 at 10:41 AM

Beautiful

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 10:49 AM

Thank you, Anna :)

Arturo Michael

August 9, 2017 at 7:49 AM

That is sweet Heidi...

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 7:51 AM

Thank you Arturo :)

Joseph May

August 9, 2017 at 7:36 AM

Beauty needs no company...A lovely tanka Heidi...

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 7:44 AM

Thank you so much Joseph :)

Russell Sivey

August 9, 2017 at 7:17 AM

Wow, this is an amazing write my friend! I REALLY loved this one! You have mastered the art of the Tanka within this poem and utilized it wonderfully! What an awesome poem, such a magnificent piece...you have impressed me completely! I shouldn't be surprised as you are a wonderful poet, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 7:22 AM

Hi Russell. I appreciate that. I have only done a couple Tanka with practicing these new forms. You have been kind to give encouraging feedback. Thank you :)

Beauty Continues To Shine

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