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Beauty At Its Best

Faith is like a flower that grows fervently Love is like a rose that glimmers majestically It's like a tender dove that flies so beautifully, For it gives me some peace that runs through my veins The sky is limitless when we soar so high The sun is shimmering silently, I can't deny We are ready to reach the stars in the universe We can't deny its beauty and shine like midnight trains Your breathtaking beauty is like sugar and wine It blends radiantly, so perfectly and oh so fine The love I have for you burns and burns like a beautiful rose It's like passionate, poise poetry that raises the spirits and pushes away painstaking prose You're soft and gentle like raindrops on rose pedals My love falls on top of you so delicately like waterfalls You're a rainbow in the sky of such squalid sorrow I will be with you momentarily, even until tomorrow Through thick and thin, We will forever grow Like two fish - fin to fin Together, we will glow In the marvelous, majestic ocean, We will share elevating emotion My emotions are true like the waves of the sea True to you forever into eternity, we sway preciously The sunlight reflects in your eyes these days Like diamond pieces that sparkle in the glorious sun It blends so well with moon's glimmering rays The moon reflects the sparkle - joyous days have begun The moonlit night reflects a moon that illuminates the soul Like the mysterious, darksome ocean that takes its tranquil toll The sun's shadow raises its blazing brow upon the land of truth and lies Babies are born, but we can all choose to live or die in our lows and highs The earthquake of time rumbles and tumbles, making a lot of elegant erosion Like the explosion of gigantic, volcanic ocean is our love of desirable devotion We try with our vivacious potential and we create something new like a lotion Life breathes into us, giving us spiritual strength like the actions of vibrant motion You and I look over the beautiful horizons, Singing with voices of a million angels in haven heavens that has no place for hells - They do shine bright like moons and suns Eternal peace will bring us together while the universe is where God and us dwells Inner joy does soothe our wild and reckless spirits, Escaping calamity and receiving gratification through skies of wonder and ease It's beyond our wild and crazy winds of wits, Enchanting us with leaves and beautiful trees that sway with the blessed breeze Serenity and gladness within us will never cease As long as you soar with me in skies of surreal seas God's creation is fervent with bright stars - That's what's truly ours...we are like flowers, graciously grown My love for you is an eternity for all time It will mend our past scars and give us powers beyond our own Written by Sharon Breidenthal (my sister) and I...

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Date: 7/9/2019 3:15:00 AM
J.W. and Sharon, I started to highlight my favorite pieces of this beautiful, well-done, heartfelt, adoring, lovely masterpiece of imagery and the whole poem got highlighted. It is a FAV for me!
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Date: 7/9/2019 9:46:00 AM
Thank you sooo much!! You are awesome! :) We both appreciate your comment on our poetry today! -JWE