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Beauty At Its Best

Faith is like a flower that grows fervently 
Love is like a rose that glimmers majestically
It's like a tender dove that flies so beautifully,
For it gives me some peace that runs through my veins 

The sky is limitless when we soar so high 
The sun is shimmering silently, I can't deny
We are ready to reach the stars in the universe
We can't deny its beauty and shine like midnight trains

Your breathtaking beauty is like sugar and wine
It blends radiantly, so perfectly and oh so fine
The love I have for you burns and burns like a beautiful rose
It's like passionate, poise poetry that raises the spirits and pushes away painstaking prose

You're soft and gentle like raindrops on rose pedals
My love falls on top of you so delicately like waterfalls
You're a rainbow in the sky of such squalid sorrow
I will be with you momentarily, even until tomorrow 

Through thick and thin,
We will forever grow 
Like two fish - fin to fin
Together, we will glow

In the marvelous, majestic ocean,
We will share elevating emotion 
My emotions are true like the waves of the sea
True to you forever into eternity, we sway preciously 

The sunlight reflects in your eyes these days
Like diamond pieces that sparkle in the glorious sun
It blends so well with moon's glimmering rays 
The moon reflects the sparkle - joyous days have begun

The moonlit night reflects a moon that illuminates the soul
Like the mysterious, darksome ocean that takes its tranquil toll 
The sun's shadow raises its blazing brow upon the land of truth and lies 
Babies are born, but we can all choose to live or die in our lows and highs 

The earthquake of time rumbles and tumbles, making a lot of elegant erosion
Like the explosion of gigantic, volcanic ocean is our love of desirable devotion 
We try with our vivacious potential and we create something new like a lotion 
Life breathes into us, giving us spiritual strength like the actions of vibrant motion

You and I look over the beautiful horizons,
Singing with voices of a million angels in haven heavens that has no place for hells -
They do shine bright like moons and suns
Eternal peace will bring us together while the universe is where God and us dwells 
 
Inner joy does soothe our wild and reckless spirits,
Escaping calamity and receiving gratification through skies of wonder and ease 
It's beyond our wild and crazy winds of wits,
Enchanting us with leaves and beautiful trees that sway with the blessed breeze 
Serenity and gladness within us will never cease
As long as you soar with me in skies of surreal seas

God's creation is fervent with bright stars - 
That's what's truly ours...we are like flowers, graciously grown 
My love for you is an eternity for all time
It will mend our past scars and give us powers beyond our own

Written by Sharon Breidenthal (my sister) and I...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/9/2019 3:15:00 AM
J.W. and Sharon, I started to highlight my favorite pieces of this beautiful, well-done, heartfelt, adoring, lovely masterpiece of imagery and the whole poem got highlighted. It is a FAV for me!
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Date: 7/9/2019 9:46:00 AM
Thank you sooo much!! You are awesome! :) We both appreciate your comment on our poetry today! -JWE

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