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Beauty and That Beast

spicy star racy car much speed no heed traffic stop burly cop license please must appease! red lips sweet hips bats eyes gets rise off hook? threw book

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/21/2017 12:29:00 PM

Totally twisted my sense of humour. How clever you are.

Janet Grace

Date: 11/25/2016 11:14:00 AM

Loved it. At first reminded me of Paul Walker's demise but in this lady's case maybe a traffic stop saved her life.

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/25/2016 7:07:00 PM

Yup, speed kills. I get confused how we make street legal cars which can go over 200 MPH. But then again, it's America — we have it our way! Thanks for visiting ~ john

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/7/2016 9:17:00 PM

You have great wit lim'rik, another fun funny one!:)

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/8/2016 8:40:00 AM

thanks cheryl — I keep finding inspiration reading your stuff!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/4/2016 8:35:00 PM

Hi John, Lol! Good footle. I really liked it :-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/4/2016 10:54:00 PM

Thanks Alexis! I sometimes footle around between lim'riks;-) Huggeruggers! ~j

Paloma P

Date: 11/4/2016 9:53:00 AM

LOL, you're good for what ails a poet. :) Works like a charm every time. ;)

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/4/2016 10:52:00 PM

We aim to please!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/3/2016 4:43:00 PM

ha! you've told an entire story in footles so seamlessly that i felt like i had read the whole thing with all the details included! excellent job, john!

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/4/2016 10:49:00 PM

If some can write in shorthand, can some read in shorteye? Just sayin;-)