Beauty

Beauty So exquisite Mirrored wrong perceptions Disguising hidden reflections Of past hurts and life’s cruel condemnation Lies beneath the surface Obscured mask of Beauty © Kim van Breda- 20 October 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/26/2014 10:14:00 AM

really love kim how you painted this very beautifully penned piece

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/26/2014 5:01:00 AM

I see many layers of interpretations possible for this rictameter. It is the kind I would read so often that I would eventually know it by memory.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/25/2014 1:07:00 AM

Beautiful, beautiful piece! Excellent write with awesome imagery! I also love this form which you mastered! You have inspired me to give it a try! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kim Van Breda
Date: 10/25/2014 3:43:00 AM

Hi Pandita Thank you for your kind comment-- much appreciated. Yes, I have discovered this format recently and become quite addicted to it-- it's fun and easy... first word 2 syllables.. next line going down 4/6/8/10/8/6/4 syllables, and then your last word same as the first. It does not have to be narrative.... i.e. every line van be a separate thought. Have fun... X