Beauty

I saw the morning clouds.
They looked like cotton soaked in sunlight.
I saw beauty in divine color!

Date of publication: 08/01/2014

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Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2014 at 10:31 PM

Found this older haiku of yours and it looks like I did meet you once or twice in the past!

Teddy Kimathi

June 30, 2014 at 12:19 AM

Hi Andrea. Might it have been in Japan that we met?

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

January 23, 2014 at 7:08 AM

Lovely haiku. Congrats on your win in the contest.

Teddy Kimathi

January 23, 2014 at 8:08 AM

Thanks for your kind applaud Abdulhafeez :) Haiku is not my expertise, but it seems I penned this one just right.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 21, 2014 at 7:10 AM

Beautiful expressions on beauty and congrats on the win, Teddy

Teddy Kimathi

January 21, 2014 at 7:44 AM

I really appreciate your praise Dr. Ram Mehta.

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2014 at 10:13 PM

that would be pretty!! Congrats.

Teddy Kimathi

January 20, 2014 at 11:35 PM

Thanks Andrea. I wish cotton could be soaked in sunlight literally. lol.

Shadow Hamilton

January 20, 2014 at 7:22 PM

a peaceful image Teddy nice pen ty for supporting my contest congrats on placing in my contest Beauty Shadow x smile hug

Teddy Kimathi

January 20, 2014 at 11:33 PM

Thanks for your kind applaud Shadow! ;-) <3 <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 8, 2014 at 9:20 AM

- Teddy, a beautiful haiku! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi

January 8, 2014 at 11:07 PM

Thanks Anne! :)

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