Beauty

I saw the morning clouds. They looked like cotton soaked in sunlight. I saw beauty in divine color! Date of publication: 08/01/2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 10:31:00 PM

Found this older haiku of yours and it looks like I did meet you once or twice in the past!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/30/2014 12:19:00 AM

Hi Andrea. Might it have been in Japan that we met?

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 1/23/2014 7:08:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Congrats on your win in the contest.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/23/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thanks for your kind applaud Abdulhafeez :) Haiku is not my expertise, but it seems I penned this one just right.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/21/2014 7:10:00 AM

Beautiful expressions on beauty and congrats on the win, Teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/21/2014 7:44:00 AM

I really appreciate your praise Dr. Ram Mehta.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2014 10:13:00 PM

that would be pretty!! Congrats.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/20/2014 11:35:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. I wish cotton could be soaked in sunlight literally. lol.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/20/2014 7:22:00 PM

a peaceful image Teddy nice pen ty for supporting my contest congrats on placing in my contest Beauty Shadow x smile hug

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/20/2014 11:33:00 PM

Thanks for your kind applaud Shadow! ;-) <3 <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2014 9:20:00 AM

- Teddy, a beautiful haiku! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/8/2014 11:07:00 PM

Thanks Anne! :)