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Beauty

I see the flower blooming As the sun shines bright It opens very slowly and lets in the light The beauty is incredible Like nothing seen before The milky shiny colour No one could ignore But now the sky is cloudy The sun is almost gone The flower closes quickly Hopefully to open in the new dawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2012 4:33:00 PM
A lovely piece, Michelle! Delightful phrasing, rhyme and imagery. Well done indeed!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:24:00 PM
Michelle,, Congratulations on your featured poem this week... Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p.d.
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Date: 5/2/2011 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michelle. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2011 3:00:00 PM
Michelle, if you go the the home page of Poetrysoup, there are many poems selected to be featured for one week, yours is one of them for this week. Each Sunday it changes... anyways keep up the excellent writing.. and thanks for the compliment on my writing~~
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Date: 5/1/2011 1:10:00 PM
Cngratulations on your poem being featured this week, michelle
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Date: 5/1/2011 10:03:00 AM
Michelle, congratulations on having your beautiful poem featured this week~~
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