Kash Poet Poet Cinquain

Beauty

Beauty
                so angelic, 
   glows on your sleeping face,                        
tempts me to touch and caress its                  
                splendour.

                  Divine
           smile lights it up,
        as my fingertips play
with your sleeping beauty which seems
                 God like.



© kashinath karmakar
By:kashinath karmakar (14th April 2011)
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Placement:7th ;(April 2011)

Contest:Traditional Cinquain Contest

Sponsor:Catie Lindsey

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Placement:3rd ;(June 2011)

Contest:Any poem of 2011

Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 29, 2011 at 5:15 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2011 at 8:52 PM so nice to see you won twice with this one, Kash. A belated congrats on your win with Brian. YEAAA.

Joseph Osita June 11, 2011 at 9:21 AM Very beautiful.Congrats on your meritorious win! Cheers*

Carrie Richards June 11, 2011 at 8:36 AM So breathtaking, just the most simple poetry, can speak with the most beautiful words known ....with such little pomp and fanfare...pure lovliness! Congratulations!!

Cory Long June 11, 2011 at 7:46 AM congrats on your win with this great piece. cory

Nette Onclaud June 11, 2011 at 1:35 AM congrats on your win, kashi... stunning! :) huggs

Zzzzz Zzzzz May 13, 2011 at 6:29 AM Vividly written...I can almost see your words take physical form on the page!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 3, 2011 at 7:24 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Kashinath. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Manouchka Doreus April 19, 2011 at 11:56 AM this is simply beautiful... sleep can be such a beautiful thing

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2011 at 5:27 AM Congratulations Kashinath on your well deserved win in Catie's contest "Traditional Cinquain". Love, Carol

Gautami Phookan April 19, 2011 at 4:04 AM Beautiful poetry, very artistically done Kashi.Many Congratulations on your well deserved win.Best wishes,Gautami

Matthew Anish April 17, 2011 at 7:17 PM Sweet cinquain! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Wilma Neels April 17, 2011 at 10:11 AM Kash, congratulations on your win in Catie's contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 17, 2011 at 5:41 AM Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 17, 2011 at 12:06 AM Congrats on this win with your very sweet cinquain, Kashinath :D!

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2011 at 11:13 PM congratulations on your placement, Kash. A really good placement! Luv, Andrea

Francine Roberts April 16, 2011 at 8:56 PM lovely, congrats on your win in the contest Kashinath

Debbie Guzzi April 16, 2011 at 2:33 PM Oh yes..love brings such beauty..wonderful tender write Congrad's Light & Love

Charles Henderson April 16, 2011 at 2:31 PM You poem is very nice as always. Very deserving of its placement. Charles

Jack Horne April 16, 2011 at 2:04 PM Many congrats again, Kash : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 16, 2011 at 1:31 PM Congrats Kashinath on your big win in this contest luv.. an exciting entry full of beauty..enjoy another top ten win..

Emma Mantle April 16, 2011 at 11:47 AM This is a great write. Beautiful indeed! Congrats, best wishes Em :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 16, 2011 at 5:58 AM Happy Weekend Kash my friend.. have fun and be happy as u creative wonderful poetry luv..

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2011 at 7:19 PM looking at this one again. a beauty for sure. Are you going to take my challenge with the ten words I gave you? My first contest at the soup, I used ten beautiful words and got some wonderful poetry from them. I wonder if the winners of that old contest can be found anymore here at Soup!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 14, 2011 at 7:01 PM Super words Kash and good luck in the contest.. moving and touching write luv..

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