Beauty

This is beauty. The sun all up and bright. Need no more. The plethora of green. The wind so sweet. On the road I go. Up and away. The path so unknown . The Lily pads pave the way. I am true. Not a facade anymore. Shattering layer by layer. The ruse put down. Just me and my mind. It has stopped now. Not a blurry confusion. All thoughts contained. The realisation finally set in. I can conquer it now. This is beauty. A clear path. With music playing. Just me and my heart. It beats according to me not the devil inside. For once I'm not doubting. Maybe it's the magic of the valley. Maybe I'm just me now. Whatever it is I'm beauty now

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/13/2024 11:48:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Some One

Date: 9/16/2023 12:18:00 AM

I love the positivity of taking control back and allowing yourself to see the beauty in life. The formatting of this poem is also neat in comparison to the rhymes, I wonder how you chose it? Fantastic job.

Ananya Goyal
Date: 9/16/2023 12:39:00 AM

Thank you so much. To decide the formatting is a tough work. It is usually a lot of trial and error