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Beautifully Grotesque

She slithers in big tree branches Waiting for darkness to took over brightness Her hiss is a venom Like a creepy sound of midnight phantom. Look directly in her eyes and you will be deceive Behind this maiden's beauty hids a grotisque cruelty She will make you fall on your knees and grovel Taking over your dominion. Her teeth is a craft whesthoned By the victim she hadt ake possession Never ever let yourself lulled by her charm If you want to miss the chance to be disarmed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/2/2016 7:46:00 AM
Congrats Aiza, for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 5/7/2016 11:03:00 AM
Aiza, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:53:00 PM
Aiza, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:01:00 AM
you have this one up twice, you must be trying to point something out. Good for you. This reminds me of A lady I know, she slithers and friends any shadow that hates beauty and light... Good Poem IT IS SO SO SO nice to read it twice. SKAT
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