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Beautiful World

Blank tortured stare a dreams lost glare caught in the snare of earths great sea. Stars shining bright great mountains height my wings take flight I’m one with thee. Theme number: 3…” With all its sham, drudgery and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 12.07.2014 Contest: Desiderata 5th

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 9:09:00 PM

BRENDA, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/16/2014 3:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Maurice

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/16/2014 3:48:00 PM

Excellent job on this challenge!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/16/2014 5:41:00 AM

what a glorious way to see the world, Brenda.. beautiful!..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 6:02:00 AM

Thanks so much Nette and thank you for my placing.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/14/2014 7:07:00 PM

Brenda, congratulations on your win! Such a wonderful positive message in your poem... perfect words and rhyme for the theme you chose Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Sandra

John Lawless

Date: 12/14/2014 5:26:00 PM

Nicely done Brenda, congrats

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/22/2014 6:00:00 AM

Thanks John

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/14/2014 2:57:00 PM

And the last line sums it up so beautifully! Congratulations on this fine poem, Brenda!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 3:55:00 PM

Thank you Carrie.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2014 2:48:00 PM

Well done Brenda! Desiderata...desired...if we so desire we can make this world of ours a beautiful place to live in. Love this winning entry; congratulations!!! #7 // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 3:55:00 PM

Thanks Paul. That's the way I feel.

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/14/2014 2:02:00 PM

congratulations on your win Brenda

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2014 10:57:00 AM

Love seeing this one again on the winners' list this time. CONGRATS,Brenda.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 1:51:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2014 9:38:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 1:51:00 PM

Thanks Jan. XOXO

Donna Jones

Date: 12/14/2014 7:54:00 AM

Brenda..you somehow managed to get much imagery in such few words..well done..really enjoyed..congratulations

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Donna

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2014 4:35:00 AM

Nice rhyme and brilliant thought well expressed, congratulations on the win, Brenda

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/14/2014 2:25:00 AM

Love ur write Brenda, the way u tuk flights to great heights from deep sea! Congrats on big win!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 1:48:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Sharma

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/14/2014 1:06:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you on the win Brenda...huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/14/2014 12:38:00 PM

Thank you Kayod5

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/13/2014 12:32:00 AM

This is a wonderful entry Brenda. Great imagery and rhyme too! Poets like you make it a beautiful world! Hugs, Connie

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/13/2014 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for such a beautiful complement Connie.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/12/2014 12:13:00 PM

A well thought out work Brenda,no doubt nette will like it;goodluck in the contest...huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:47:00 PM

Thanks for your words of encouragement Kayod5

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/12/2014 10:23:00 AM

very good Brenda simplicitic beauty gl in contest hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:50:00 PM

Thanks Shadow

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/12/2014 8:47:00 AM

You did this so well Brenda!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:49:00 PM

Thank you Richard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2014 11:08:00 PM

we must be so close in age to both love that song Close to You. It's so beautiful!! The song of my summer with my 14 year old boyfriend!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:50:00 PM

I was three I believe. ;-).

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/11/2014 9:36:00 PM

despite all and inspite all, still the world is beautiful.. :)!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:45:00 PM

You are so right Olive. Thanks for stopping by.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/10/2014 12:25:00 PM

great rhyme and meter Brenda good message too gl in contest hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:43:00 PM

Thank you Shadow

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2014 3:59:00 PM

Brenda, this is one of the most amazing ones I have seen for this contest. Love it!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:42:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/9/2014 9:35:00 AM

Such great insight and creativity in this one my friend. I score it a solid 7 and the message rings true and strong!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:42:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2014 5:23:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I have those moments as described in the second stanza even though they are rare..It is a wonderful feeling to be on the mountain and take flight..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/12/2014 7:40:00 PM

Thank you Sara.