Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Verse

Beautiful World

Blank tortured stare
a dreams lost glare
caught in the snare
of earths great sea.

Stars shining bright
great mountains height 
my wings take flight 
I’m one with thee.

Theme number:
3…” With all its sham, drudgery and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
12.07.2014
Contest: Desiderata
5th

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Poet Destroyer A December 26, 2014 at 9:09 PM BRENDA, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~

Maurice Yvonne December 16, 2014 at 3:49 PM Congratulations on your win. Brenda Meier-Hans December 22, 2014 at 6:02 AM Thank you Maurice

Maurice Yvonne December 16, 2014 at 3:48 PM Excellent job on this challenge!

Nette Onclaud December 16, 2014 at 5:41 AM what a glorious way to see the world, Brenda.. beautiful!..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats! Brenda Meier-Hans December 22, 2014 at 6:02 AM Thanks so much Nette and thank you for my placing.

Sandra Haight December 14, 2014 at 7:07 PM Brenda, congratulations on your win! Such a wonderful positive message in your poem... perfect words and rhyme for the theme you chose Hugs, Sandra Brenda Meier-Hans December 22, 2014 at 6:01 AM Thank you Sandra

John Lawless December 14, 2014 at 5:26 PM Nicely done Brenda, congrats Brenda Meier-Hans December 22, 2014 at 6:00 AM Thanks John

Carrie Richards December 14, 2014 at 2:57 PM And the last line sums it up so beautifully! Congratulations on this fine poem, Brenda!! Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 3:55 PM Thank you Carrie.

Paul Callus December 14, 2014 at 2:48 PM Well done Brenda! Desiderata...desired...if we so desire we can make this world of ours a beautiful place to live in. Love this winning entry; congratulations!!! #7 // paul Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 3:55 PM Thanks Paul. That's the way I feel.

Robert Stoner Jr December 14, 2014 at 2:02 PM congratulations on your win Brenda Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 3:54 PM Thanks Robert

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2014 at 10:57 AM Love seeing this one again on the winners' list this time. CONGRATS,Brenda. Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 1:51 PM Thanks Andrea.

Jan Allison December 14, 2014 at 9:38 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 1:51 PM Thanks Jan. XOXO

Donna Jones December 14, 2014 at 7:54 AM Brenda..you somehow managed to get much imagery in such few words..well done..really enjoyed..congratulations Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 1:50 PM Thank you Donna

Dr.Ram Mehta December 14, 2014 at 4:35 AM Nice rhyme and brilliant thought well expressed, congratulations on the win, Brenda Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 1:50 PM Thank you Dr. Mehta

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 14, 2014 at 2:25 AM Love ur write Brenda, the way u tuk flights to great heights from deep sea! Congrats on big win! Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 1:48 PM Thanks Dr. Sharma

Kayod5 Kayode December 14, 2014 at 1:06 AM Dropping back to congratulate you on the win Brenda...huggs Brenda Meier-Hans December 14, 2014 at 12:38 PM Thank you Kayod5

Connie Marcum Wong December 13, 2014 at 12:32 AM This is a wonderful entry Brenda. Great imagery and rhyme too! Poets like you make it a beautiful world! Hugs, Connie Brenda Meier-Hans December 13, 2014 at 1:32 PM Thank you so much for such a beautiful complement Connie.

Kayod5 Kayode December 12, 2014 at 12:13 PM A well thought out work Brenda,no doubt nette will like it;goodluck in the contest...huggs Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:47 PM Thanks for your words of encouragement Kayod5

Shadow Hamilton December 12, 2014 at 10:23 AM very good Brenda simplicitic beauty gl in contest hugs Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:50 PM Thanks Shadow

Richard Lamoureux December 12, 2014 at 8:47 AM You did this so well Brenda! Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:49 PM Thank you Richard.

Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2014 at 11:08 PM we must be so close in age to both love that song Close to You. It's so beautiful!! The song of my summer with my 14 year old boyfriend!! Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:50 PM I was three I believe. ;-).

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 11, 2014 at 9:36 PM despite all and inspite all, still the world is beautiful.. :)! Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:45 PM You are so right Olive. Thanks for stopping by.

Shadow Hamilton December 10, 2014 at 12:25 PM great rhyme and meter Brenda good message too gl in contest hugs Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:43 PM Thank you Shadow

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2014 at 3:59 PM Brenda, this is one of the most amazing ones I have seen for this contest. Love it!! Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:42 PM Thanks Andrea.

Robert Lindley December 9, 2014 at 9:35 AM Such great insight and creativity in this one my friend. I score it a solid 7 and the message rings true and strong! Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:42 PM Thanks so much Robert

Sara Kendrick December 8, 2014 at 5:23 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I have those moments as described in the second stanza even though they are rare..It is a wonderful feeling to be on the mountain and take flight..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara Brenda Meier-Hans December 12, 2014 at 7:40 PM Thank you Sara.

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