Beautiful With Hair

Everyone says it's what's inside that counts
Yet I don't believe their words
If they belive that saying is true
They wouldn't throw her to the birds

Everyone thinks 
she looks just like a bear
Because you can't see her face
And there's hair everywhere

But they don't see 
the beauty within
Her loving smiles
That she share with her kin

She'e a beautiful person
Who enjoys life every day
Who sheds a tear every time
Someone goes away

She loves to give hugs
And sweet kisses too
And her favourite words to say
Are I LOVE YOU

She's a wonderfull person
Not an open book
And I'm sure you'll see this
If you take a second look
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 12:01 PM
I looked twice and yes I seen the beauty. Small typo "believe". A belated welcome to the soup from your fellow Canadian. Richard.
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Sometimes only the people closest to a person know and understand the true character that they are..Enjoyed reading your touching work..Sara
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