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Beautiful White Doves

Beautiful white doves fly above the deep blue sky.. Doves the color of white.. White feathers Soft and pure.. Doves fly so gracefully.. Soaring freely across the universe.. A representation of freedom exists upon the deep blue sky.. Tasting freedom Smelling freedom.. Feeling freedom.. For I am blessed.. I am swimming in graciousness.. Drowning in freedom I am.. One shall never forget a life of.. Restraits.. Of which.. Is Limited.. Hidden behind walls.. Tucked away from all.. Stuck in a corner alone.. Intoxicated by isolation.. Smothered in my own captivation.. Many doses of lonliness surrounds.. Beautiful white doves soaring so high.. Flying freely.. So full of grace.. Elegant.. Visions of beauty An abundance of peacefulness.. I am free.. Free as the beautiful white doves..

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Date: 5/22/2018 4:11:00 PM
WOW! Robertina, an exquisite poem filled with intense emotional imagery. Your expressive poem is completely captivating, compelling and one that I lingered over.. Your third stanza offers deep insight and rich contrast which deepens the powerful impact of your profound poem.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Robertina B.
Date: 5/22/2018 6:27:00 PM
" I am so happy you enjoyed my poem, Susan!! Your are so kind! Your feedback means so much to me.. Thank you so very much.. I appreciate all of your beautiful kind words"..
Date: 5/16/2018 3:58:00 PM
"Intoxicated by isolation.. Smothered in my own captivation.. Many doses of lonliness surrounds." my favorite lines. Way cool!
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Robertina B.
Date: 5/16/2018 6:58:00 PM
" Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, Rhoda ".. So happy it's your fav. lines..
Date: 5/16/2018 2:23:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Robertina! Supremely spiritual and soul-elevating. My mind vibes w/this pen rhythm. Ty for this invigorating cup of mental freshness. May love light your path in life always.
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Robertina B.
Date: 5/16/2018 7:03:00 PM
"Thank you so much for visiting , Freddie ".. You are so kind.. Your kind words made my day!!! Many Blessings to you, Freddie..

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