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Beautiful Sky

its the most beautiful sky ive ever seen the grass the deepest evergreen yet theres one cloud ive seen before and now its back to rain and pour i start to panic as old insecurities set in that i wanna bask in the rain thats the nievest sin but then i realize i have in my hand a new safer umbrella to help me stand so i open it up so beautiful and strong knowing it was there all along i dont get a drop on my new found skin knowing the umbrellas here if it should rain again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 8:50:00 AM
Lovely poem, enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 8/1/2009 5:46:00 AM
Good morning Samantha, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I am hoping you will enjoy your weekend as much as I am going to enjoy mine. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2009 12:20:00 AM
Interesting piece. Sounds like it has hidden meaning. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2009 7:38:00 AM
Wonderful poem - the strength and protection we need is always there. Glad you found it in your poem. Krista
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Date: 7/31/2009 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful poem Samantha>>James
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Date: 7/30/2009 9:20:00 PM
feeling of security and especially security found is wonderful. nice write
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