Krishnanand Guptar Poet Rhyme

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Written 26 March 2025

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Beautiful Shine of Faith

Believe you can and you're halfway there" - Theodore Roosevelt
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                                         Beautiful Shine of Faith

                            When swirls of sadness swamp the heart
                                   And vile men hold lovers apart,
                               When clouds of anguish grip the mind
                                And one`s path in life one can`t find,

                                       When the spirit is at low tide
                                    And no one can serve as a guide,
                                    It`s time faith in oneself to light
                            And seek its shine that`s sparkling bright.

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Sotto Poet April 1, 2025 at 5:58 PM Your writing is profound, strong, and clear. The poem is beautifully written and conveys a powerful message. Congratulations! Krishnanand Guptar April 2, 2025 at 4:41 AM Thank you a lot, dear poet for your visit to my page and for appreciating the above poem. Your comments , as always, raise my spirits up. Wish you a pleasant and blessed day.

Terry Miller March 31, 2025 at 2:57 AM Love this poem so well crafted, great message, congratulations Krishnanand Guptar March 31, 2025 at 3:54 AM Thank you my friend for visiting my page, appreciating the poem and for your kind wishes. These mean a lot to me. Wish you a pleasant start of the week.

thriveni c mysore March 30, 2025 at 9:31 PM loved the quote and your verse invites to recite once more! lovely. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Krishnanand Guptar March 30, 2025 at 11:10 PM Thank you dear friend for visiting my page, for appreciating the above poem and your kind wishes. Have a blessed day and start of the week.

Ink Empress March 28, 2025 at 6:43 AM Dear KG, What a deeply moving and thought provoking poem woven with such soulful metaphors! I love the quote as it somehow reminds me of being hopeful and to believe! I also love how youv written “And vile men keep lovers apart, When clouds of anguish grip the mind And one`s path in life one can`t find,” so poetic and heart touching! I love the way youv phrased those lines too! Creates a beautiful cadence. Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always Krishnanand Guptar April 2, 2025 at 4:37 AM Thanks a lot dear poetess for visiting my page and for your very inspiring comments, which have been lingering in my mind for several days and lighting my way ahead in the poetic field. Sending you blessings wishes.

CayCay Godwin March 27, 2025 at 5:55 AM I love the feel behind the wise message your poem imparts. (check directions, I think the word 'beautiful' must be in the poem's title.) All the best ... CayCay Krishnanand Guptar March 27, 2025 at 7:51 AM Thanks a lot, dear friend, for appreciating the message in the above poem. I am particularly grateful to you for kindly drawing my attention to an oversight in the title of the poem. I have amended it with a little twist to the poem. You may wish to flit over it. May the blessings of the Lord rest with you and those near and dear to you.