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Contest...Write Eight Beautiful Lines-sponsor Constance La France

Beautiful Our Ardent Dreams

Lay here my love, let us count the stars
and find ardent dreams of lovers
cast upon the galaxy of our wishes
found in a timeless realm of reverie
as we bathe in the ardor of our souls
seeking refuge from a lonely world
woven into the passing of time
by the pulsating heartbeats of love
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Miller Avatar
March 31, 2025 at 3:01 AM
A very sweet romantic write for this contest, congratulations
mysore Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 9:34 PM
night of all nights write! beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 12:42 PM
- So beautiful and romantic, Frederic :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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