Russell Sivey Poet Tanka

Beautiful Noise

The birds are chirping
A brook is gurgling nearby
Plenty of Spring sounds
Beautiful noise surrounds me
All this lovesick one can bear

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Chris D. Aechtner's "Many Of The Reasons Behind It All - Let The Masks Fall" contest

3/18/2012

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Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2012 at 10:44 PM oh, and yes, forgot to say again, sorry about the arm. Is there a chance it will ever get better?

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2012 at 10:43 PM THe title is excellent for this sweet poem, Russell. that 's a lot of really beautiful noise to rub in your lovesickness!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 19, 2012 at 4:34 PM most beautiful sentiments are impressive in this little piece of poetry Russell.. luv the last line.. it is awesome and uplifts the poem .. good luck in the contesdt by Chris..luv..

Broken Butterfly March 18, 2012 at 11:21 PM Beautiful Russell, best of luck

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2012 at 9:48 PM Russell, very beautiful.... have yourself a good night~ always*PD

Elizabeth Wesley March 18, 2012 at 1:07 PM Great entry for the contest Rusty, the soundsof spring are so wonderful and they chase the stillness oif winter with their magic! :) So glad to hear school is not too bad. I hope it is all going well for you and it gets over with soon. Luv, Lizzie

Nette Onclaud March 18, 2012 at 10:43 AM the lovesick feel gave this tanka its full flavor, russell... enjoyed the twirl in the end... awesome!.. best of luck and huggs as i greet you happy sunday!..:)