Beautiful --Named For Celene Cresent--Thank You For the Name(:

[They] brush over closed lids 
                       of tear filled eyes, 
                                  if only known why, 

why they so sorrowfully cry, 
              but future tense gives none 
                            of secrets way to be held, 

and so the dreams fall to cries 
                  and the dreams of futures, 
                                                   barely tell...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bloomsfield Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Can i name it?BEAUTIFUL .Celene.
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Loving the last verse O.o And your structure gives me a sense of lyrical.It flows,and life and tears and dreams flow with it:) Beautifull one Boo
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