Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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Beautiful Mountains - the Choka Style

~ Beautiful  Mountains ~ 
( Double  Choka  ) 



Over the mountains 
Sun shines in all its splendor 
Beautiful trees stand out tall 
Birds assemble there 
Eagles soar right to the top 
Wild flowers covers the ground 

Blue mountains stand grand 
Deers and bears roam all around 
Eyes can't get enough nice scene 
All trees seem to glow 
You can feel God's loving touch 
Breathe in enjoy all the view. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015



December.14.2017





“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 



~ Author's Notes : 

The " Choka " is  a Japanese poetry form or style.

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Darlene De Beaulieu December 20, 2017 at 8:00 AM Dorian, you paint a beautiful picture with your words. I like this poem. have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 29, 2017 at 6:24 PM I wish the same for you my friend. Dorian Petersen Potter December 24, 2017 at 9:33 AM Thank you ever so kindly Darlene , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my mountain poem:)) I deeply appreciate it! So very kind of you! I wish you and your family a Very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year my friend!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Curtis Moorman December 18, 2017 at 4:57 AM Great pictures --- even greater poem!! Dorian Petersen Potter December 24, 2017 at 9:32 AM Thank you ever so kindly Curtis , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my mountain poem:)) I deeply appreciate it! So very kind of you! I wish you and your family a Very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year my friend!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D