Beautiful Lies

Beautiful Lies

        Gazing on your beloved face sublime,
        Love’s mist reflection blazes in your eyes--
        Because I know I have so little time,
        I whisper kisses with the same old lies.
        Each time I vow that I will never leave.
        Tho caught again bereft that I must go.
        The simple truth too cruel to believe
        And hiding truth retains our lovers’ glow.
        Reality is killer to love’s plans,
        No matter how both lovers promised true.
        No man's vision has passion more consumed
        Than my yearning eyes nourished sight of you.
               You slept---and I slipped silent through the door--
               Donned uniform and headed back to war.

             
 written 12/10/2012  (alternate ending for the 21st centuray average man)

                         Beautiful Lies

        Gazing on your beloved face sublime,
        Love’s mist reflection blazes in your eyes--
        Because I know I have so little time,
        I whisper kisses with the same old lies.
        Each time I vow that I will never leave.
        Tho caught again bereft that I must go.
        The simple truth too cruel to believe
        And hiding truth retains our lovers’ glow.
        Reality is killer to love’s plans,
        No matter how both lovers promised true.
        No man's vision has passion more consumed
        Than my yearning eyes nourished sights of you.
               She sleeps---and I sneak silent through the door--
               Now dare to seek the playoff football score.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bunton Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 10:10 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:00 PM
haha, how cute the way you did american man too. BIG congrats and I am hoping you are well. Luv, Andrea
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations Victoria xx
A   Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Victoria, a wonderful winning poem~ PD
Veetil Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 9:53 PM
superb creativity...Congrats..
Guzzi Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 1:14 PM
So cool you did two ending! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 6:42 AM
Hello Victoria, I love both versions. If I had to choose between the two I would choose the first with a somber ending to a somber poem. But I love the second one too with it's humorous ending at the end. Well done!
Collins Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Dear Victoria - You are wonderful. The stark sad scene in #1 is heart wrenching and amazing how you change all that in #2. What a wit. love, Kathy
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