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Beautiful Liar

Water fell from eyes which held a face staring; me Hiding will not pass the sight of your wanting need So I'll beautifully lie...

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/6/2010 8:55:00 PM

A nice write on the beauty. Good luck, Jessica

John Rhinem

Date: 8/6/2010 7:02:00 PM

Ps. Smile ~ "Thank You" for stopping by today for, it is Always a joy and a pleasure, whenever I see "Your Lovely Grace" ~ I think I'll fave this for some reason; perhaps, because "I See 'You Beautiful Soul," flowing preciously amid its beautiful verse ~ "

John Rhinem

Date: 8/6/2010 6:57:00 PM

Smile ~ Well I do not know about this one dear; whether one need lie or even worry at all? ~ "Hello Precious & Priceless Jessica Arteaga" and, may I add extremely soulful and gifted too!!! ~ I truly hope that life is treating "Your Splendors" beautifully dear and that, the "Light of Love" is flowing through "Your Beautiful Heart" ~ I read this write three times and, it stirs me inside...."Beautifully Bittersweet" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always," John!:) ~ Smile, on we go....

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/6/2010 1:52:00 PM

oh I like it! thanks for your comments!

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/6/2010 1:32:00 PM

good write. i enjoyed your thoughts. keep up the good work.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 8/6/2010 12:20:00 PM

Beautiful poen Jessica. I have changed the name of my poem I hope you catch it now

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/6/2010 11:35:00 AM

Excellent Jessica.. a great entry..I think your title was a song a while back.. good luck.. my entry is FREE.. a great Tanka ..happy weekend..with luv..