Beautiful Liar

Water fell from eyes
which held a face staring; me
Hiding will not pass
the sight of your wanting need
So I'll beautifully lie...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:55 PM
A nice write on the beauty. Good luck, Jessica
Rhinem Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Ps. Smile ~ "Thank You" for stopping by today for, it is Always a joy and a pleasure, whenever I see "Your Lovely Grace" ~ I think I'll fave this for some reason; perhaps, because "I See 'You Beautiful Soul," flowing preciously amid its beautiful verse ~ "
Rhinem Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:57 PM
Smile ~ Well I do not know about this one dear; whether one need lie or even worry at all? ~ "Hello Precious & Priceless Jessica Arteaga" and, may I add extremely soulful and gifted too!!! ~ I truly hope that life is treating "Your Splendors" beautifully dear and that, the "Light of Love" is flowing through "Your Beautiful Heart" ~ I read this write three times and, it stirs me inside...."Beautifully Bittersweet" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always," John!:) ~ Smile, on we go....
Culverhouse Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 1:52 PM
oh I like it! thanks for your comments!
Cobb Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 1:32 PM
good write. i enjoyed your thoughts. keep up the good work.
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Beautiful poen Jessica. I have changed the name of my poem I hope you catch it now
Sweetheart Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Excellent Jessica.. a great entry..I think your title was a song a while back.. good luck.. my entry is FREE.. a great Tanka ..happy weekend..with luv..
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