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Beautiful End

You are the dream, I dared to see, albeit knowing my somber eyes might be daydreaming for a while. You are the song, I dared to sing, hoping the world won't comprehend your imperfect lyrics the way I did. You, calm as evening breeze, I let you touch my soul, when mundane days of life made me look for left pieces of peace, You, my broken beloved, I let my heart witness you like a miracle, without thinking how beyond repair you might leave me. You are that incomplete poem, I happened to scribble effortlessly, hiding my silent sighs of chaotic longing behind pale poetic verses. You are my north star so far away, I wish to wish upon, that someday you'll be the beautiful end to my ceaseless waiting.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 12/12/2023 2:09:00 PM

Your imagery transcends words and showcases your boundless creativity, imagination, and originality. Your words stimulate the spirit and leave a permanent mark on the ethereal universe, preserving this deep poetic interaction. These phrases echo the longing for one's beloved amid a bittersweet tapestry of passion and despair since distance and absence can make even the most tenacious souls feel lonely. May you find your loved one and fulfill your dreams.

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/14/2023 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for this wonderful feedback.. so very kind of you to say such heavy words for my simpe poetry! Truly appreciate your kind support! Amen to your lovely wishes!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 9:34:00 AM

Awwn look at you writing all lovey dovey. Who is the inspiration for this beautiful poem island twilight. Haha. I missed teasing you. I absolutely love the flow of emotions in this and the longing that you’ve depicted in such eloquence, you’ve evolved so much as a poet to express more in an evocative manner, i always knew you were special when i first spotted you on insta and took you onto island, hope to see you write for an island prompt too soon and if you do pls post here ahah.love this

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/14/2023 8:53:00 AM

Aww you are so funny dear Ink haha.. thank you so much for your beautiful feedback and your kind support! Thank you for all the guidance all these years.. I hope to pen more for Island prompts again!

Silent One

Date: 12/12/2023 8:49:00 AM

This is so romantic and sad craving for the loved one... distance and absence are so difficult and can make a person feel so lonely... I hope you can achieve your dream and be with your beloved.. great poetry.

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/14/2023 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely heartfelt feedback! I appreciate it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2023 3:58:00 AM

Ahhh!! Romantic lines you have penned in this one. That perfect person is out there and is also waiting for you. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 12/14/2023 8:50:00 AM

Aww thank you so much for your sweet lovely feedback Sara! I appreciate your kind support so much!