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Beautiful Dreamer

~Beautiful Dreamer~ 
 (Quatrain) 


 Precious halo made of gold 
 With velvet petals made of dew 
 Here of sudden I behold 
 Things that never before I knew 

 Miracles in the early dawn 
 Spread with love and tender care 
 Standing I'm here in awe of 
 Everything that looks so fair 

 Sent with love and gentle care 
 To keep us nice and warm 
 With all his grace for us to wear 
 Delivered message for her to share. 


 Dorian Petersen Potter 
 Aka ladydp2000 
 copyright@2015


July.3.2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bateman Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 7:08 PM
Hello "D" . . . Subtle words and images weaved together with such radiance, hope, and beauty. A magnificent rendering of "Beautiful Dreamer" -- Yes!! Not to belie my original "Kansas Roots," I classify your poem here as "A really swell write indeed!! Best Always, Gary (7/FAV!!)
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July 4, 2015 at 1:50 AM
Hello G!Thank you ever so kindly Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it all, my dear friend.You're very kind, say hello to Ingrid for me.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
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