Beautiful Dreamer

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~Beautiful Dreamer~ (Quatrain) Precious halo made of gold With velvet petals made of dew Here of sudden I behold Things that never before I knew Miracles in the early dawn Spread with love and tender care Standing I'm here in awe of Everything that looks so fair Sent with love and gentle care To keep us nice and warm With all his grace for us to wear Delivered message for her to share. Dorian Petersen Potter Aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 July.3.2015

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Gary Bateman

Date: 7/3/2015 7:08:00 PM

Hello "D" . . . Subtle words and images weaved together with such radiance, hope, and beauty. A magnificent rendering of "Beautiful Dreamer" -- Yes!! Not to belie my original "Kansas Roots," I classify your poem here as "A really swell write indeed!! Best Always, Gary (7/FAV!!)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/4/2015 1:50:00 AM

Hello G!Thank you ever so kindly Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it all, my dear friend.You're very kind, say hello to Ingrid for me.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D